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fraze 7-4 vs Odd Ways 2-1 - ODD WINS
Netcees Battle League Season VIII Rules Due Dates:
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For additional Rules refer to rule thread First to 5, win by at least two votes @fraze @Odd Ways |
12 is good
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Word homie.
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-Pray for the Departed
Cred flatlined u harsh, so trust I'm gonna do the same shit I'll punch his top so hard, when paramedics lift his skull it'll sound like a rain stick The hood banged ya bitch out, there was no resistin hardly I saw so many niggas twisted in her sheets, the shit looked like a fuckin toga party Tryna explain ya weak raps, n we're all like damn dude U used a Greece line so corny, I thought John Travolta would of come n danced through We know he's a hater, the hood says he ain't gettin no paper Fact: the closest he'll get to a trap King, is catchin dinner every 22 acres This dude is a straight clown, but no worries cuz this tech'll let go I'll put the metal to this jokers mouth, n give em more exposure than Jared Leto U act froggy then it's a wrap, u'll be river bound just for actin hard The way his body'll hit the water, the crime scene'll come w/ olympic judges n scorecards @fraze |
edit: meant to post this last night
lost but i got cred last week. sometimes my ‘lines go over heads’. if this week goes to the wire… i'm choking you after bringing it down around your neck…. im going for the throat. if you see hawks… better scamper quick… so fast to give Odd a bull rush with Lynch that I would have won the NFL championship... fraze is hot as sin. shut the fuck up. just nod and grin. if im at odds with a bitch… ill bust bananas inna face…. now that’s a sloppy cap.a.chin... ya bars are kneelin huddled round corners on my old block. such a crap shoot... so ill keep shooting odds with the 3-4 cause you know i keep the roll hot…. im in the field concealed, sniping bitches with aggressive means… when i get charged up… i’m prone to ‘pick a low position’ then hit you with the special beam... fraze or Bust huh?..... easy win’s what you thought, but *syke* you’ve been robbed... now you can go Destroyer on the boards like him titty fucking his wife... |
@Sharp open for votes
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I've got odd taking this. .His verse had more structure and I thought his punches hit harder. I thought phrase was alright and he made odd run for his money but odd came with just enough
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Toga party / travolta
Vs Fraze opening 3 bars. Not got time to go into any more detail Vote fraze |
Fraze
Bar1-Concept had a cool twist I liked. 3/5 Bar2-Felt like wording could've been better. 2.5/5 Bar3-Nah wasn't feelin. 1/5 Bar4-Cool punch, got too wordy 2.5/5 Bar5-I liked the Piccolo play. Again still felt wording could've made this hit harder 3/5. Bar6-Ehh wasn't the biggest fan of this. 2/5 Overall- 14/30 ---- Odd Bar1-Cool thought it had a pop 3/5 Bar2-Yeah I lol'd 3/5 Bar3-Again I liked this. 3/5 Bar4-Was cool. 2.5/5 Bar5-Was cool again. 2.5/5 Bar6-Rhyming in the end didn't end off the sweetest. Thought the concept was cool though. 2.75/5 Overall- 16.75/30 Both came pretty solid, but I favored Odd's concepts a bit more. |
opener was ok
toga party was good travolta was nastyyyy trap king lol - this nigga haha jared leto was mild closer was mean vs wire bars were flipped every which was in 04 bro okay fed off opening concept which to me was creative, still played but creative - My lynch bar last year was doper in LLL cap a chin was weak 3-4 was stretched an over worded - killed impact low position was ok closer over worded but dece if fraze can stop over wordin his concepts he would be so much better fr fr. Odd got it imo |
The hood banged ya bitch out, there was no resistin hardly
I saw so many niggas twisted in her sheets, the shit looked like a fuckin toga party This dude is a straight clown, but no worries cuz this tech'll let go I'll put the metal to this jokers mouth, n give em more exposure than Jared Leto vs im in the field concealed, sniping bitches with aggressive means… when i get charged up… i’m prone to ‘pick a low position’ then hit you with the special beam... .. There was a bunch of good/dope concepts in this battle that were not executed 100% so that took away from both drops, I hate seeing something that could be so dope just fizzle out, but one had the better quotes and misses was slightly better. v/Odd |
Cred flatlined u harsh, so trust I'm gonna do the same shit
I'll punch his top so hard, when paramedics lift his skull it'll sound like a rain stick // this was aight The hood banged ya bitch out, there was no resistin hardly I saw so many niggas twisted in her sheets, the shit looked like a fuckin toga party // lol Tryna explain ya weak raps, n we're all like damn dude U used a Greece line so corny, I thought John Travolta would of come n danced through // this killed me lolllzz We know he's a hater, the hood says he ain't gettin no paper Fact: the closest he'll get to a trap King, is catchin dinner every 22 acres // its ok This dude is a straight clown, but no worries cuz this tech'll let go I'll put the metal to this jokers mouth, n give em more exposure than Jared Leto // cool U act froggy then it's a wrap, u'll be river bound just for actin hard The way his body'll hit the water, the crime scene'll come w/ olympic judges n scorecards // wtf lol well i think in the olympics they judge off not making a splash haha. but i still got a visual of a body flyin all cray. vs. lost but i got cred last week. sometimes my ‘lines go over heads’. if this week goes to the wire… i'm choking you after bringing it down around your neck…. // not bad im going for the throat. if you see hawks… better scamper quick… so fast to give Odd a bull rush with Lynch that I would have won the NFL championship... // cool fraze is hot as sin. shut the fuck up. just nod and grin. if im at odds with a bitch… ill bust bananas inna face…. now that’s a sloppy cap.a.chin... // not feeling ya bars are kneelin huddled round corners on my old block. such a crap shoot... so ill keep shooting odds with the 3-4 cause you know i keep the roll hot…. // ahh i want to like it im in the field concealed, sniping bitches with aggressive means… when i get charged up… i’m prone to ‘pick a low position’ then hit you with the special beam... // cool fraze or Bust huh?..... easy win’s what you thought, but *syke* you’ve been robbed... now you can go Destroyer on the boards like him titty fucking his wife... // i didn't like v/ odd. it was a pretty mean verse. __________________ |
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i got fraze in a fucking close one odds was too simple toga party fire both had BBAAAAD misses but I thought fraze had the best line and the better line if I put they 2 best lines vs one another v fraze |
The hood banged ya bitch out, there was no resistin hardly
I saw so many niggas twisted in her sheets, the shit looked like a fuckin toga party vs. im going for the throat. if you see hawks… better scamper quick… so fast to give Odd a bull rush with Lynch that I would have won the NFL championship... ya bars are kneelin huddled round corners on my old block. such a crap shoot... so ill keep shooting odds with the 3-4 cause you know i keep the roll hot…. im in the field concealed, sniping bitches with aggressive means… when i get charged up… i’m prone to ‘pick a low position’ then hit you with the special beam... I got Fraze here. I thought Odd Ways had LOTB with the toga line and his wording was much better, but the concepts from fraze were quite solid and got it for me. I also did kind of like the Destroyer's wife's titties line. V/ Fraze |
Odd
Opener was oooooook Haha toga party was cool Greece was ok lol Trap king coulda been better idk though it wasn't referenced well enuff to land good Jared Leto was ok Didn't really like the closer much Fraze Didn't like ur opener that much I've seen that down to the wire/ use the wire to choke u type shit a lot Bull rush wit lynch was ok U lost me on the cap a chin bar Me shooting odds was slick Pick a low position was nice Close was weak Damn, close call, I felt odd was consistent with light jabs plus had a couple misses n faze had two solid lines a light jab n a couple misses so overall the 2 dope barz from fraze pretty much wrap this up I'm.. Good shit tho.. Fraze |
he hood banged ya bitch out, there was no resistin hardly
I saw so many niggas twisted in her sheets, the shit looked like a fuckin toga party Tryna explain ya weak raps, n we're all like damn dude U used a Greece line so corny, I thought John Travolta would of come n danced through his dude is a straight clown, but no worries cuz this tech'll let go I'll put the metal to this jokers mouth, n give em more exposure than Jared Leto U act froggy then it's a wrap, u'll be river bound just for actin hard The way his body'll hit the water, the crime scene'll come w/ olympic judges n scorecards This is what I liked out of ur verse. Travolta dancing thru was lulz. Toga party was original but worded badly. Jared leto was barely. And hit the water is barely too. With better wording tho leto n Olympic would've been nice. I liked the concept. lost but i got cred last week. sometimes my ‘lines go over heads’. if this week goes to the wire… i'm choking you after bringing it down around your neck…. im going for the throat. if you see hawks… better scamper quick… so fast to give Odd a bull rush with Lynch that I would have won the NFL championship.. ya bars are kneelin huddled round corners on my old block. such a crap shoot... so ill keep shooting odds with the 3-4 cause you know i keep the roll hot…. im in the field concealed, sniping bitches with aggressive means… when i get charged up… i’m prone to ‘pick a low position’ then hit you with the special beam.. This is what I liked outta ur verse. That first line barely made it tho. I think craze got cause his quotables were better. Both had bad misses that made zero sense, so... V. Fraze |
fraze
im going for the throat. if you see hawks… better scamper quick… so fast to give Odd a bull rush with Lynch that I would have won the NFL championship... im in the field concealed, sniping bitches with aggressive means… when i get charged up… i’m prone to ‘pick a low position’ then hit you with the SPECIAL beam... Odd Ways This dude is a straight clown, but no worries cuz this tech'll let go I'll put the metal to this jokers mouth, n give em more exposure than Jared Leto U act froggy then it's a wrap, u'll be river bound just for actin hard The way his body'll hit the water, the crime scene'll come w/ olympic judges n scorecards So this actually comes down to two quotes per piece... the bolded ones were the haymakers which I feel were both pretty good... so ima judge em by the other two bars which were also nice not as good as the bolded ones. I like OW's better because it was more up to date... and the first punch i've seen on the new joker... Frazer bar was dope but that shit old though so v/ Odd Ways |
6-5 odd
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Cred flatlined u harsh, so trust I'm gonna do the same shit
I'll punch his top so hard, when paramedics lift his skull it'll sound like a rain stick concept doesn't work that well but execution was smooth The hood banged ya bitch out, there was no resistin hardly I saw so many niggas twisted in her sheets, the shit looked like a fuckin toga party pretty nice Tryna explain ya weak raps, n we're all like damn dude U used a Greece line so corny, I thought John Travolta would of come n danced through haha cool We know he's a hater, the hood says he ain't gettin no paper Fact: the closest he'll get to a trap King, is catchin dinner every 22 acres I get the concept... not great though This dude is a straight clown, but no worries cuz this tech'll let go I'll put the metal to this jokers mouth, n give em more exposure than Jared Leto okay U act froggy then it's a wrap, u'll be river bound just for actin hard The way his body'll hit the water, the crime scene'll come w/ olympic judges n scorecards creative idea, + for that... doesn't actually hit that hard for me though vs. lost but i got cred last week. sometimes my ‘lines go over heads’. if this week goes to the wire… i'm choking you after bringing it down around your neck…. old school feel wit the cliche play... decent im going for the throat. if you see hawks… better scamper quick… so fast to give Odd a bull rush with Lynch that I would have won the NFL championship... I like the idea, coulda been executed better but cool fraze is hot as sin. shut the fuck up. just nod and grin. if im at odds with a bitch… ill bust bananas inna face…. now that’s a sloppy cap.a.chin... ehhh nah ya bars are kneelin huddled round corners on my old block. such a crap shoot... so ill keep shooting odds with the 3-4 cause you know i keep the roll hot…. I fuck wit this one im in the field concealed, sniping bitches with aggressive means… when i get charged up… i’m prone to ‘pick a low position’ then hit you with the special beam... solid here fraze or Bust huh?..... easy win’s what you thought, but *syke* you’ve been robbed... now you can go Destroyer on the boards like him titty fucking his wife... wasn't feelin that This was close as fuck. Hard to pick a winner to be honest... both had some nice ones Odd had toga party which was good, greece and olympic judges were solid Craps was heat from Fraze. Audible rush, special beam, & wire were all creative & decent. Well..... this one won't help for gettin the battle closed but I gotta go wit Fraze on consistency By a REAL small margin tho... this was a good one. Wouldn't usually vote on one this close V/ Fraze |
rain stick ehhh.. toga was niiice.. Grease is old as fuck and horrible.. trap king is weird, totally random.. leto was too simple.. closer was corny
wire is old.. lynch was too simple.. bananas was ehh.. 34 was ok.. beam was coo.. closer sucked odds had lotb with the toga shit.. fraze had one more line i liked, barely.. this was close as fuck v- frazd |
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