Time thief

[Pharaohs Army]

i laughed at most of the gender-related comments. that being said, this is well done. impressive sentence structure and syllables.
you personalized it. in my humble opinion, as cool as it is, the "mus-b-trippin"..i like the ending from a rhyme perspective,but i was expecting something more spectacular or descriptive based on what you had written previously up to that point.