Time thief
 

The day was as cloudy, as my judgment. The only condensation coming from my pores. Cold heart, smoldering veins. Wanting nothing more, than to pack up my years, and be here no more. Sneak off with my stolen time like an heirloom watch. I inherited these wounds, when your heart wouldn't tick to my rhythm.. Buried in your plot to turn me to ashes. Absent me from matter. Unwind me before you stop.

In love since, my heart was as rowdy, as the loveless. Questioned intentions, leave lingering sentiments in your passing mist so thick it makes me choke on your presence. Trying to purge this unpleasant essence from the depth of me. But, no way to rebuke my inner demons without evicting the rest of me. So the best of me sits in purgatory haunted by my flaws. No hope for escape when, my guilt is down for the cause.
Touchless friction. Tensions rising, blood be boiling, yet love, love be missing. Not seeing the bigger picture, much less my vision. Unrest. Division. My chest is giving, caving. Restless mission, impossible to continue its beating. Beginning, unfolding, retreating. Ending, in senseless collision.
Hate is finding cracks and breaks to squeeze into the empty shell of our passion. Not particular to what you put into it, passion just wants to be filled. Made to feel real. This gloveless fitting. Patiently gripping this watery substance we are ground into. Love's recoiling, unforgiving? We must...might just be trippin.

that you, Nane? @Gina

Oh lawd. I certainly hope I don't have to endure another welcoming committee. :(

Tits or gtfo

Lol. Dont listen to them. Keep posting

I enjoyed this a lot.

That's all I have to say.

It was honestly very good.

I would leave some constructive feedback but it's almost 2am and i don't wanna.

I really enjoyed the read tho.

Fucking savages.

Leep posting brah

r u gorl

I don't know what a girl is, but I am female, a woman, if that's what you mean.

lmaoooo

i laughed at most of the gender-related comments. that being said, this is well done. impressive sentence structure and syllables.
you personalized it. in my humble opinion, as cool as it is, the "mus-b-trippin"..i like the ending from a rhyme perspective,but i was expecting something more spectacular or descriptive based on what you had written previously up to that point.

sucked thx