Lotto Smirk 6-3 vs Unfukwitable 4-3 - UNFUK WINS

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Netcees Battle League Season VIII

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Thursday, July 23th 2015 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

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First to 5, win by at least two votes
@Lotto Smirk @Unfukwitable

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Lotto is penalized 4 votes for missing voting last week

penalty will take effect if votes aren't made up by thursday

[Lotto Smirk]

Ur not wanted, people keep u at arms length if uve not noticed
un bearable its only for a short period of time as he's even annoying in small doses
Got weapons stacked, my tazer'll put you on the floor
N I'll hand u with a charge worse than the one gow's cousin was arrested for
He ain't gangster can't even crip walk cus his legs are made of lard
if he waving straps in the air it's only when this fat fuck trys on his favourite bra's
how'd hush label you as best newcomer, smells funny like rasputin
cus if he the leader of the new school I hope ON THAT DAY there's a mass shooting
u got attacked, raise a glass to that but the gun didn't have the power
so u can get a celebratory shot better than that one when u left that baby shower
hush n murda like me better, they'd sabotage u helps not showing as of late
Verse has suicide wrote all over it cus if they don't help that's the descision it would take
There 12 sure you can write one more bar

[Unfukwitable]

They'll say LS Diesel, Until LSD 's'll have his day end w/ the saddest news,
He'll expirence trips so deadly, Travel agents around the world is gettin bad reviews.
U joined the Tag Tourney, So when Haymakers is gettin sent to ur member,
How will u be able to catch fraze -with that catalog of lines no one could ever remember.
My heart's grim, I'm shootin gats w/ Infs attached to spark limbs,
shots Blue through Lot, leaving spaces big enough for Handicaps to park in.
He re-uses gun bars, But his team never had .357's gripped with rounds;
All them lines u Rotary cycle, Yet u can't phone sum1 from ya circle w/ a Pound.
Punches strong enough to put cracks in the ground, I'll break ya mug;
Going against me, U'll need Fissure gear, Or prepare yaself to end up in a Lake of blood.
U love a slut bucket, mean while she is all on me, fiendin to taste;
That bitch played Gelato & during the past few months I've been creamin her face.

[iSpaz]

Ur not wanted, people keep u at arms length if uve not noticed
un bearable its only for a short period of time as he's even annoying in small doses
// a lil corny imo
Got weapons stacked, my tazer'll put you on the floor
N I'll hand u with a charge worse than the one gow's cousin was arrested for
// lol
He ain't gangster can't even crip walk cus his legs are made of lard
if he waving straps in the air it's only when this fat fuck trys on his favourite bra's
// funny, lard/br ahs tho?
how'd hush label you as best newcomer, smells funny like rasputin
cus if he the leader of the new school I hope ON THAT DAY there's a mass shooting
// not feelin
u got attacked, raise a glass to that but the gun didn't have the power
so u can get a celebratory shot better than that one when u left that baby shower
// ok
hush n murda like me better, they'd sabotage u helps not showing as of late
Verse has suicide wrote all over it cus if they don't help that's the descision it would take
// ok

vs.

They'll say LS Diesel, Until LSD 's'll have his day end w/ the saddest news,
He'll expirence trips so deadly, Travel agents around the world is gettin bad reviews.
// aight
U joined the Tag Tourney, So when Haymakers is gettin sent to ur member,
How will u be able to catch fraze -with that catalog of lines no one could ever remember.
// cool
My heart's grim, I'm shootin gats w/ Infs attached to spark limbs,
shots Blue through Lot, leaving spaces big enough for Handicaps to park in.
// i liked this
He re-uses gun bars, But his team never had .357's gripped with rounds;
All them lines u Rotary cycle, Yet u can't phone sum1 from ya circle w/ a Pound.
// aight
Punches strong enough to put cracks in the ground, I'll break ya mug;
Going against me, U'll need Fissure gear, Or prepare yaself to end up in a Lake of blood.
// nah
U love a slut bucket, mean while she is all on me, fiendin to taste;
That bitch played Gelato & during the past few months I've been creamin her face.
// ok


v/unfukwit. seen both come better than this.

[Useless]

Got weapons stacked, my tazer'll put you on the floor
N I'll hand u with a charge worse than the one gow's cousin was arrested for
this could've been nice worded differently. What does 'hand u with a charge' mean? I get what u was going for but the wordings just awkward
He ain't gangster can't even crip walk cus his legs are made of lard
if he waving straps in the air it's only when this fat fuck trys on his favourite bra's
ehh
how'd hush label you as best newcomer, smells funny like rasputin
cus if he the leader of the new school I hope ON THAT DAY there's a mass shooting
I liked this concept more when I used it against u lol

Sorry bro but ur verse was full of played concepts n bad wording. U almost there tho keep at it.


They'll say LS Diesel, Until LSD 's'll have his day end w/ the saddest news,
He'll expirence trips so deadly, Travel agents around the world is gettin bad reviews.
this was aite. Good wording but 'experience trips so deadly' isn't really doing it for me. Could've been flipped better imo
U joined the Tag Tourney, So when Haymakers is gettin sent to ur member,
How will u be able to catch fraze -with that catalog of lines no one could ever remember.
aite this is a played wordplay and u used it to dies his tagbpartner so that's a double fail in my book. Other than that it was a good flip on a played np
My heart's grim, I'm shootin gats w/ Infs attached to spark limbs,
shots Blue through Lot, leaving spaces big enough for Handicaps to park in.
this was ok
He re-uses gun bars, But his team never had .357's gripped with rounds;
All them lines u Rotary cycle, Yet u can't phone sum1 from ya circle w/ a Pound
I like the wp but thought the execution could've worded better.

Overall I'm kinda disappointed in this battle cause i like both of yalls styles but there was some bad wording in this battle. Unfuk had the fresher concepts and better execution tho.

V. Unfuk

[Mr. J]

Got weapons stacked, my tazer'll put you on the floor
N I'll hand u with a charge worse than the one gow's cousin was arrested for

how'd hush label you as best newcomer, smells funny like rasputin
cus if he the leader of the new school I hope ON THAT DAY there's a mass shooting
^^^^
I felt like these were the stronger lines that you brought to the table
I enjoyed the rest but the punches didn't really seem to land against your opponent
other than that I feel like you could have used the suicide and baby shower lines better
otherwise it was more bragging then it was punching....


My heart's grim, I'm shootin gats w/ Infs attached to spark limbs,
shots Blue through Lot, leaving spaces big enough for Handicaps to park in
He re-uses gun bars, But his team never had .357's gripped with rounds;
All them lines u Rotary cycle, Yet u can't phone sum1 from ya circle w/ a Pound.
^^^^
I felt like these were the strongest lines that you came with
wasn't really feeling that fraze line, I see what you were doing but it didn't work for me
the opener was pretty decent as well, seemed to work well for you
that closer reminds me of that Joe Budden 'Gucci' punch so I'll dock that off
other then that this seemed to take the cake

v/ehhh, this is hard to choose, I think I'm going to have to go with Lotto
he seemed to have a stronger edge as opposed to Unfuck, I enjoyed his verse more
but I had to give it to Lotto due to Unfuck using a line that seems vaguely familiar to me
other than that, dope battle fella's

[Aero]

Lotto:

Ur not wanted, people keep u at arms length if uve not noticed
un bearable its only for a short period of time as he's even annoying in small doses
nah breh
Got weapons stacked, my tazer'll put you on the floor
N I'll hand u with a charge worse than the one gow's cousin was arrested for
liked this
He ain't gangster can't even crip walk cus his legs are made of lard
if he waving straps in the air it's only when this fat fuck trys on his favourite bra's
bra/strap a bit predictable
how'd hush label you as best newcomer, smells funny like rasputin
cus if he the leader of the new school I hope ON THAT DAY there's a mass shooting
haha
u got attacked, raise a glass to that but the gun didn't have the power
so u can get a celebratory shot better than that one when u left that baby shower
meh
hush n murda like me better, they'd sabotage u helps not showing as of late
Verse has suicide wrote all over it cus if they don't help that's the descision it would take
didn't like the fanboying with "hush and murda like me" and punch was bland

verse was aiight, should try to be a bit more creative




Unfuck:



They'll say LS Diesel, Until LSD 's'll have his day end w/ the saddest news,
He'll expirence trips so deadly, Travel agents around the world is gettin bad reviews.
no sir! lol
U joined the Tag Tourney, So when Haymakers is gettin sent to ur member,
How will u be able to catch fraze -with that catalog of lines no one could ever remember.
ok
My heart's grim, I'm shootin gats w/ Infs attached to spark limbs,
shots Blue through Lot, leaving spaces big enough for Handicaps to park in.
meean
He re-uses gun bars, But his team never had .357's gripped with rounds;
All them lines u Rotary cycle, Yet u can't phone sum1 from ya circle w/ a Pound.
this could've been sick but you messed it up. don't be surprised if I use this later in a better way
Punches strong enough to put cracks in the ground, I'll break ya mug;
Going against me, U'll need Fissure gear, Or prepare yaself to end up in a Lake of blood.
nope
U love a slut bucket, mean while she is all on me, fiendin to taste;
That bitch played Gelato & during the past few months I've been creamin her face.
lol mean, good np


inconsistent but some nice bars in there


cool battle fellas,

MVGT Unfuck

[Bash]

Ur not wanted, people keep u at arms length if uve not noticed
un bearable its only for a short period of time as he's even annoying in small doses
-no Bueno
Got weapons stacked, my tazer'll put you on the floor
N I'll hand u with a charge worse than the one gow's cousin was arrested for
-had potential, should have worded it better
He ain't gangster can't even crip walk cus his legs are made of lard
if he waving straps in the air it's only when this fat fuck trys on his favourite bra's
-played concept, if the twist was fresher/better I'd let it rock though
how'd hush label you as best newcomer, smells funny like rasputin
cus if he the leader of the new school I hope ON THAT DAY there's a mass shooting
-I like
u got attacked, raise a glass to that but the gun didn't have the power
so u can get a celebratory shot better than that one when u left that baby shower
-needed better execution but it was ight at best
hush n murda like me better, they'd sabotage u helps not showing as of late
Verse has suicide wrote all over it cus if they don't help that's the descision it would take
-not fond of the set, punch wasnt much of a zinger

Vs

They'll say LS Diesel, Until LSD 's'll have his day end w/ the saddest news,
He'll expirence trips so deadly, Travel agents around the world is gettin bad reviews.
- I like, nothin heavy but this was ok
U joined the Tag Tourney, So when Haymakers is gettin sent to ur member,
How will u be able to catch fraze -with that catalog of lines no one could ever remember.
-Nice
My heart's grim, I'm shootin gats w/ Infs attached to spark limbs,
shots Blue through Lot, leaving spaces big enough for Handicaps to park in.
-Shew... Nice
He re-uses gun bars, But his team never had .357's gripped with rounds;
All them lines u Rotary cycle, Yet u can't phone sum1 from ya circle w/ a Pound.
-something's alil off on this bar
Punches strong enough to put cracks in the ground, I'll break ya mug;
Going against me, U'll need Fissure gear, Or prepare yaself to end up in a Lake of blood.
-this was eh to me
U love a slut bucket, mean while she is all on me, fiendin to taste;
That bitch played Gelato & during the past few months I've been creamin her face.
-decent closer

V/ Unfuk.. Lotto just needs to brush up on his wording. Unfuk takes it w/ a better overall verse

[Netcees Battle League]

4-1 Unfuk. Bump

[Swerve]

Got weapons stacked, my tazer'll put you on the floor
N I'll hand u with a charge worse than the one gow's cousin was arrested for
how'd hush label you as best newcomer, smells funny like rasputin
cus if he the leader of the new school I hope ON THAT DAY there's a mass shooting

vs.

My heart's grim, I'm shootin gats w/ Infs attached to spark limbs,
shots Blue through Lot, leaving spaces big enough for Handicaps to park in
He re-uses gun bars, But his team never had .357's gripped with rounds;
All them lines u Rotary cycle, Yet u can't phone sum1 from ya circle w/ a Pound.
U love a slut bucket, mean while she is all on me, fiendin to taste;
That bitch played Gelato & during the past few months I've been creamin her face.


Close stuff here. That Rotary bar barely being there (the w/p is sick) got it for unfuck as I had it tied before that. Good battle.

V/ Unfuckwitable.

[King Karaoke]

Hi...


Got weapons stacked, my tazer'll put you on the floor
N I'll hand u with a charge worse than the one gow's cousin was arrested for
how'd hush label you as best newcomer, smells funny like rasputin
cus if he the leader of the new school I hope ON THAT DAY there's a mass shooting
u got attacked, raise a glass to that but the gun didn't have the power
so u can get a celebratory shot better than that one when u left that baby shower

This was cool...
like i said before your wording hurts u a lot of the time, to the point it ruins whatever concept u had...
mass shooting was your best line...
G0W line has been done all week but i like this one...


U joined the Tag Tourney, So when Haymakers is gettin sent to ur member,
How will u be able to catch fraze -with that catalog of lines no one could ever remember.
My heart's grim, I'm shootin gats w/ Infs attached to spark limbs,
shots Blue through Lot, leaving spaces big enough for Handicaps to park in.
He re-uses gun bars, But his team never had .357's gripped with rounds;
All them lines u Rotary cycle, Yet u can't phone sum1 from ya circle w/ a Pound.
U love a slut bucket, mean while she is all on me, fiendin to taste;
That bitch played Gelato & during the past few months I've been creamin her face.

I noticed that u try to do too much with some of your lines like your opener...
U did the same with the rotary line but it was good enough...

Very close battle but I think Un was more consistent...

vote- Un...

Bye...