IAmRhetoric 2-3 vs Bust 2-3 {Bust wins}

Amen. · 07-16-2015, 11:15 AM

opener mild
selabit had potential but you kept is basic an simple
bang bust was good
no bars concept played
painful tips was ok but mild
cooked for a minute mild
closer wordy as fuck but had potential mild as is

you improving bro. need to focus on trying to be a little more creative with your concepts man. try and jot down a concept and write 3 bars from it in different ways. go with the one that seems the harshest. that helped me backkkkkkkkk in the dino-text era when I started. you have potential but you still writing text battles like you face to face or something. be a little more creative bro and you'll be straight.

vs

opener was mild but cool personal approach
hoe show win was dece
I am/nas fan was good
weak lines was nice
loves muff was ok lol
involved in crime was dece
receive this L was basic

bust got this

07-16-2015, 11:15 AM	#9
Amen. Banned Join Date: Jun 2015 Location: New York Posts: 2,047 Battle Record: 16-9 Rep Power: 0	opener mild selabit had potential but you kept is basic an simple bang bust was good no bars concept played painful tips was ok but mild cooked for a minute mild closer wordy as fuck but had potential mild as is you improving bro. need to focus on trying to be a little more creative with your concepts man. try and jot down a concept and write 3 bars from it in different ways. go with the one that seems the harshest. that helped me backkkkkkkkk in the dino-text era when I started. you have potential but you still writing text battles like you face to face or something. be a little more creative bro and you'll be straight. vs opener was mild but cool personal approach hoe show win was dece I am/nas fan was good weak lines was nice loves muff was ok lol involved in crime was dece receive this L was basic bust got this