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IAmRhetoric 2-3 vs Bust 2-3 {Bust wins}
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For additional Rules refer to rule thread First to 5, win by at least two votes @IAmRhetoric 2-3 vs @Bust 2-3 |
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im probably gonna drop soon, and more than that.
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Sally Sells Seashells? you were prolly that type of chump in school
You gettin a shell every couple steps, until that fuckin bucket's full girls make him uncomfortable, he the type to tell a bitch "it's not that I don't like you, unfortunately i'm just selabit" that's kinda funny, but now i'm using ur internet search history to hurt you, First the 9mil bang bust, then we roll up n start taking shots at his girl too, U fuckin worm you, you don't deserve to battle me, Don't hassle me, Bust got no bars like a phone with no battery You really need help w/ your bars, you homo swine Fuck with mine, and u gettin painful tips like the noshow shine my bars are oh-so fine, i'm also obsessed over the nina Get in the ring with me n ur gettin cooked for a minute like left over pizza Im on my nursery shit, Ding Dong, get ya Bell rocked U don't sell rocks, post on that wall and ur gettin ur egg cracked when the shells drop |
said he had Barz fa Hush then got scarred n crushed, this punk was merciful
I mean this pussy said he had 16 Strictly for Him.. N not ONE was personal Ur text games as pathetic as ur sex game, dooog u should leave, Or instead of anticipating a ho show-win.... Go find a twat u could beat, I got a vicious can that'll shatter ya frame so don't cause this shit ta blam Cos 1 shot'll leave pieces of I Am all over a wall like nas' biggest fan His shits weak so we'll prolly hear quick key to cover up the fact all of its lame NFL 101, no matter how often u attempt to rush, Weak Lines WONT get u positive gain U ride Every big name but claim ur straight, muafucka u the gayest clown EVER No joke, so if u hear um say he only loooooves Muff.... S'Cos it Sounds better What's all this faggotry? Poppin 9's droppin dimes this false ass act we see Cos the only time he involved with crime.. Is being the victim of assault n battery.. just promise U'll Quit after this, cos each bar spit is a clutter, I I mean after u receive this L, Swear to us ull take ur garbage to another site.. |
girls make him uncomfortable, he the type to tell a bitch
"it's not that I don't like you, unfortunately i'm just selabit" that's kinda funny, but now i'm using ur internet search history to hurt you, First the 9mil bang bust, then we roll up n start taking shots at his girl too, ^^^^ I really wanted to find more about your verse to enjoy but the only lines I could really pull out of that were these... I feel as though you need to work more on your execution some lines seemed like they would go some where but it just came across rushed you don't need to rush to get up a verse before your opponent... you have several days, bulk up your concepts & peep a few battles & work your style in... either way...decent drop... said he had Barz fa Hush then got scarred n crushed, this punk was merciful I mean this pussy said he had 16 Strictly for Him.. N not ONE was personal I got a vicious can that'll shatter ya frame so don't cause this shit ta blam Cos 1 shot'll leave pieces of I Am all over a wall like nas' biggest fan His shits weak so we'll prolly hear quick key to cover up the fact all of its lame NFL 101, no matter how often u attempt to rush, Weak Lines WONT get u positive gain ^^^ you were the stronger out of both of you in this battle what leaned me was that 'I Am' Nas line, that was slick the NFL line was pretty dope as well, the rest was ehhhh your lines were more precise, but the filler could have killed you luckily you snuck a few gems through and kept it moving v/Bust, he was the stronger of both battlers today as for IAm I felt that you could have came with a stronger verse this came across rushed & didn't really help you in the end other then that, I think you are on the right track... cool battle guys... |
A few of rhetorics bars looked like they were going somewhere but then the execution was just not there. They were either really statementish or played and underwhelming. I wanna help u out n tell what u what to do but i really don't know. Concepts n wording I guess.
Bust had more lines I liked than didn't like. U went punch, filler, punch, filler, etc. And I ain't mad at u, u did plenty to win. The opener was a nice personal and lulz, that 'I am' line was pretty dope, that involved in a crime line was dope IMO, could be played but I haven't seen it, which is crazy cause its a pretty obvious concept, I got one similar to it myself this week. I wasnt really feeling the NFL line i thought could've been flipped better but it was OK. Anyway other than the obvi filler I enjoyed ur verse. V. Busted |
opener mild
selabit had potential but you kept is basic an simple bang bust was good no bars concept played painful tips was ok but mild cooked for a minute mild closer wordy as fuck but had potential mild as is you improving bro. need to focus on trying to be a little more creative with your concepts man. try and jot down a concept and write 3 bars from it in different ways. go with the one that seems the harshest. that helped me backkkkkkkkk in the dino-text era when I started. you have potential but you still writing text battles like you face to face or something. be a little more creative bro and you'll be straight. vs opener was mild but cool personal approach hoe show win was dece I am/nas fan was good weak lines was nice loves muff was ok lol involved in crime was dece receive this L was basic bust got this |
Bang bust
Vs I am, weak line V/Bust. IAmR still has few things to workout. Needs better concepts. I use to tell newer guys to read around n see what everyone likes. Then come back and incorporate what you saw in your writing. Bust takes this in all CATs IMO. |
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crazy close battle rhetoric had mad lil jabs an shit but bust had those two HEAVY ass blows close as fuck bcuz when bust missed he missed bad I think Bust edged it slightly but this is a debateable battler no clear cut body by any means v Bust |
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