Orc 2-3 vs Mr. J 0-0 - ORC WINS

Maximus · 07-10-2015, 04:35 PM

Bet your top dollar this is murder, nah this accidental, let's blanket dawwwg
I had you backwards, & hit you with a 'cro'bar to turn you into J's son Todd
Ok, basic idea but didn't really hit
my verses are acid flowers that grow wild, & suit the style I give
when he write verses. he think gold blooms I'm like nah "Thats one big pile of shit"
This failed completely
If dude calls me a bitch, I'll slap this pussy, I'm a boss. it's about to show fam
keep it drug related & put bread on his head & call him Powdered Toast Man
Better but poorly worded, u had two 'ands' in one line which weakened the bar's impact
the last battle I was in was Shadow boxing, "What's the risk?" he's asking
You dope? bring that list in, 'cause I'll play Ali this time around & just eclipse this faggot
Not feeling much
this was on a whim, he's prolly doing research in a Batman tshirt gloating at home
I find it funny cause the irony shows..that I have another dead man ghosting my posts
Cool actually
if he beats the breaks off me, I'll just get gassed & take it to his own lane
maybe that explains the whole reason I got up in that ass like it was road rage
Weak closer
Not a solid verse by any means but definitely wasn't complete garbage either, work on ur wording and be more creative with ya concepts.
Vs
I'm the Last King of Freshness. I'll Blind u 4 being frail wen u see trouble
Ya Teeth'll make a Lasting Impression.. & u'll read Braille offa Each Knuckle
Didn't like this
J won't make a killer post here. YOOO -> Is Jim a dope peer?
U'll Get Cut when the Nasal Stick Out... & u need to trim that Nose Hair
Dope bro
Fuck this Clowns smirking. Once the Louds working O's so Stellar
Doggg... You'll Catch A Body quickaa than Crowd Surfing at Coachella
Aight
U still hot & street? Nah, u gotta be offed, honestly. It's gotta be
1 cut'll leave him witha Permanent Smile that'd make his Laughing Gas obsolete
Ok
It's so so wack that u tryna come with ''oh no!'' No Holds Facts
& how you Been Stalked I find it reaaaal ironic that You Don't Know Jack
Played concept and this wasn't flipped creatively either
This dork bitch is gonna die. && Orc IS the God of Lime
Shit. U can check ANY Jewelry Store & realise Quartz is a Common find
Not a very solid showing from u compared to usual drops but there were some lines that did like and ur verse flowed better than ur contender's.
V/orc

07-10-2015, 04:35 PM	#15
Maximus Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 923 Battle Record: 25-26 Champed - NBL Cypher Rep Power: 11169472	Bet your top dollar this is murder, nah this accidental, let's blanket dawwwg I had you backwards, & hit you with a 'cro'bar to turn you into J's son Todd Ok, basic idea but didn't really hit my verses are acid flowers that grow wild, & suit the style I give when he write verses. he think gold blooms I'm like nah "Thats one big pile of shit" This failed completely If dude calls me a bitch, I'll slap this pussy, I'm a boss. it's about to show fam keep it drug related & put bread on his head & call him Powdered Toast Man Better but poorly worded, u had two 'ands' in one line which weakened the bar's impact the last battle I was in was Shadow boxing, "What's the risk?" he's asking You dope? bring that list in, 'cause I'll play Ali this time around & just eclipse this faggot Not feeling much this was on a whim, he's prolly doing research in a Batman tshirt gloating at home I find it funny cause the irony shows..that I have another dead man ghosting my posts Cool actually if he beats the breaks off me, I'll just get gassed & take it to his own lane maybe that explains the whole reason I got up in that ass like it was road rage Weak closer Not a solid verse by any means but definitely wasn't complete garbage either, work on ur wording and be more creative with ya concepts. Vs I'm the Last King of Freshness. I'll Blind u 4 being frail wen u see trouble Ya Teeth'll make a Lasting Impression.. & u'll read Braille offa Each Knuckle Didn't like this J won't make a killer post here. YOOO -> Is Jim a dope peer? U'll Get Cut when the Nasal Stick Out... & u need to trim that Nose Hair Dope bro Fuck this Clowns smirking. Once the Louds working O's so Stellar Doggg... You'll Catch A Body quickaa than Crowd Surfing at Coachella Aight U still hot & street? Nah, u gotta be offed, honestly. It's gotta be 1 cut'll leave him witha Permanent Smile that'd make his Laughing Gas obsolete Ok It's so so wack that u tryna come with ''oh no!'' No Holds Facts & how you Been Stalked I find it reaaaal ironic that You Don't Know Jack Played concept and this wasn't flipped creatively either This dork bitch is gonna die. && Orc IS the God of Lime Shit. U can check ANY Jewelry Store & realise Quartz is a Common find Not a very solid showing from u compared to usual drops but there were some lines that did like and ur verse flowed better than ur contender's. V/orc