Ace 0-0 Vs Swerve 0-0 - ACE WINS

Allen Knight · 07-06-2015, 03:29 PM

Netcees Battle League Season VIII

Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Thursday, July 9th 2015 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

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First to 5, win by at least two votes
@Ace @Swerve

Ace · 07-07-2015, 12:09 AM

In. 16

Ace · 07-09-2015, 02:33 PM

No Show
You're a no go
Slow mo
Go go
Po Po
So low
Go Pro
Dough's low
Mo flow
Joe Schmo

Swerve · 07-09-2015, 05:14 PM

You probably want to post a verse.

Edit: Oh and 10, I'm not wasting 6 extra.

Swerve · 07-10-2015, 12:31 AM

Ace has to beg to get laid, I almost feel bad for the kid,
Some dudes put pussy on a pedestal…he Shanghai towers the shit.
The girls who say yes are ugly, that’s a fact that we know,
You wouldn’t see Ace with a 10 getting blackjack at a casino.
When we talk guns, this dude shits his pants lately,
If the heat wave in the air, he runs inside, closes his blinds and turn on the A/C.
His ace in the hole? Some mediocre lines that won’t get a win,
My ace in the hole? Sizing up the plot of land before I bury him.
Bullet Farm make it rain slugs, boy its gonna get dark,
Closest he got to see-sawed pump action is playing at a kids park.
@Ace

Ace · 07-10-2015, 12:56 AM

my b just saw this.. postin soon

Ace · 07-10-2015, 01:29 AM

Aiyyo
I'll fuckin bruise this mark..
One punch. You'll take longer to get on ur feet than a fuckin evolution chart.
This is top notch, homie. What I got in store is rude..
When YOU get in the Mix.. whack is the solvent n i'll mop the floor with you.
Screw ur crew nigga. These wannabes aint causin no harm..
What kind of dumb fuckin Hicks think they can grow Bullets out from a Farm.
Now the safety off, hammer cocked, my gun antics insane..
I'll give you the Trig work that'd put mathematics to shame.
Swerve used to be decent. Now theres barely any enjoyment..
Ur career didnt just missile down. Dude forgot the launch codes for the deployment.
Mahfucka.

sral · 07-10-2015, 08:26 AM

I hate "this quote vs this quote" voting, tbh. Swerve was cool here, Ace with a 10 was a cool idea but could have hit harder, ace in the hole too I felt pretty much the same about - nice idea, no real sting to it. Heat in the hair was slightly amusing.

Ace had the evolution shit, Trig work was okay but still felt a bit flat, closer seemed alright but nothing special. Pretty boring generic fest with only the opener really hitting for me from Ace.

I guess I got to edge it him, though, here.

fraze · 07-10-2015, 09:20 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Swerve

Ace has to beg to get laid, I almost feel bad for the kid,
Some dudes put pussy on a pedestal…he Shanghai towers the shit.
creative concept but the punch isn't harsh enough to be a hard hit
The girls who say yes are ugly, that’s a fact that we know,
You wouldn’t see Ace with a 10 getting blackjack at a casino.
another cool concept but not worded well
When we talk guns, this dude shits his pants lately,
If the heat wave in the air, he runs inside, closes his blinds and turn on the A/C.
a little corny. and the punch is too wordy
His ace in the hole? Some mediocre lines that won’t get a win,
My ace in the hole? Sizing up the plot of land before I bury him.
this was meh. concept is played / simple
Bullet Farm make it rain slugs, boy its gonna get dark,
Closest he got to see-sawed pump action is playing at a kids park.
awkward wording to me
@Ace

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ace

Aiyyo
I'll fuckin bruise this mark..
One punch. You'll take longer to get on ur feet than a fuckin evolution chart.
dope concept but you wasted the setup
This is top notch, homie. What I got in store is rude..
When YOU get in the Mix.. whack is the solvent n i'll mop the floor with you.
don't like the wording and this is a little forced
Screw ur crew nigga. These wannabes aint causin no harm..
What kind of dumb fuckin Hicks think they can grow Bullets out from a Farm.
this was kinda a wasted bar. not hard hitting and no real flip.
Now the safety off, hammer cocked, my gun antics insane..
I'll give you the Trig work that'd put mathematics to shame.
meh. simple.
Swerve used to be decent. Now theres barely any enjoyment..
Ur career didnt just missile down. Dude forgot the launch codes for the deployment.
meh as well

This was an interesting battle. Swerve had some cool concepts, but is probably shaking off rust because he had a few bars that were played or too simple to be effective. If he can keep up with the concepts and work on his wording, I think he could be competitive. i liked blackjack and shangtai towers but neither was fully quotable. the played ace in the hole bar also hurts your verse a little bit.

Ace had a dope opener. I thought he would win based on the strength of that, but the rest of the verse was disappointing. He also didn't really maximize the effectiveness of his concept in the opener because it wasn't set up at all. The rest of the verse seemed a little rushed. Didn't really have any stand out concepts so it wasn't hard hitting to me.

Not really sure what happened cause I saw some nice bars from Ace in the cypher, but i ended up with two almost quotes for Swerve and one for Ace. Ace's was lotb, but he didn't really have anything else. They were about even on misses with trig and mop the floor kinda bad, but not as bad as ace in the hole.

Close battle to me, I feel like you could easily argue for either side. Meh. I think I will go with Ace b/c I really like that evolution chart bar.

Vote: Ace

Useless · 07-10-2015, 05:22 PM

Swerve
-this was an OK jab. Concept was meh but wording carries it.
-this could've been dope but i thought the execution was lacking.
-I thought this was a good flip.
-this is already played on him but I thought it was a solid flip
-another OK jab. Generic concept with good wording but still bland.

Ace
-decent jab...generic but a good flip
-wasn't feeling this. Wack is the solvent? Nahhh
-statementish and pretty much a wasted line lol
-this was a mediocre jab.
-meh another jab, better than the last line but it was still mediocre.

I gotta give this one to swerve for better concepts, better wording and an overall better verse IMO. It was close, ace had a decent verse but he had too many mediocre and generic bars and a couple misses.

Vote swerve

Kill Spree · 07-10-2015, 07:31 PM

Ace has to beg to get laid, I almost feel bad for the kid,
Some dudes put pussy on a pedestal…he Shanghai towers the shit.
not feelin this
The girls who say yes are ugly, that’s a fact that we know,
You wouldn’t see Ace with a 10 getting blackjack at a casino.
cool concept but meh
When we talk guns, this dude shits his pants lately,
If the heat wave in the air, he runs inside, closes his blinds and turn on the A/C.
nah
His ace in the hole? Some mediocre lines that won’t get a win,
My ace in the hole? Sizing up the plot of land before I bury him.
ok
Bullet Farm make it rain slugs, boy its gonna get dark,
Closest he got to see-sawed pump action is playing at a kids park.
played

Aiyyo
I'll fuckin bruise this mark..
One punch. You'll take longer to get on ur feet than a fuckin evolution chart.
concepts ok...no set up tho?
This is top notch, homie. What I got in store is rude..
When YOU get in the Mix.. whack is the solvent n i'll mop the floor with you.
ok
Screw ur crew nigga. These wannabes aint causin no harm..
What kind of dumb fuckin Hicks think they can grow Bullets out from a Farm.
no
Now the safety off, hammer cocked, my gun antics insane..
I'll give you the Trig work that'd put mathematics to shame.
ok
Swerve used to be decent. Now theres barely any enjoyment..
Ur career didnt just missile down. Dude forgot the launch codes for the deployment.
aight

overall
bland battle... swerve had some generic shit bad wording with one decent jab, ace had a few misses that were better but he kept it too simplbe with his set ups. but enough to take this

v/Ace

Mr. J · 07-11-2015, 04:19 PM

Ace has to beg to get laid, I almost feel bad for the kid,
Some dudes put pussy on a pedestal…he Shanghai towers the shit.

When we talk guns, this dude shits his pants lately,
If the heat wave in the air, he runs inside, closes his blinds and turn on the A/C.
^^^^
these were the stand outs from your verse, I felt what followed kinda flucked it up
I laughed at the A/C line but I felt you could have used daily instead of lately...
that would have sounded better to me...decent verse though

I'll fuckin bruise this mark..
One punch. You'll take longer to get on ur feet than a fuckin evolution chart.
This is top notch, homie. What I got in store is rude..
When YOU get in the Mix.. whack is the solvent n i'll mop the floor with you.

Now the safety off, hammer cocked, my gun antics insane..
I'll give you the Trig work that'd put mathematics to shame.
^^^
these lines were pretty nice, I enjoy a verse that you have to break down
I really enjoyed that 'evolution' reference to be honest, that mop line was slick too
the trig line was pretty cool, some of the rest could have worked...
but I think you did work...

v/Ace, he delivered a harder impacting in my opinion, Swerve was cool too
but I feel like had he left out the ace in the hole & came with something different it would be evenly matched
other than that I got Ace winning this due to consistency

Bust · 07-12-2015, 07:29 AM

Swerve

Opener was ok
Ace wit a 10 was ok also
Heat waves was weak
Ace in the joke was oooooook
Closer was ehh

Ace

Opener was cool
Solvent was ok
Grow bullets was ehh
Trig work was ok
Closer was ok

Ok, swerve had a few good bars nothing real harsh just light hit that coulda been doper n ace kinda stayed consistent with jabs n Imo took this based off having a couple more land.. Good read tho

Vote ace

Cred · 07-12-2015, 11:28 AM

Blackjack & closer was alrighttt

vs

Opener was nasty, bullet farm

This battle was alright. Expected more from both alias & swerve. Evolution was lotb shit was nasty.

Vote Ace

Unfukwitable · 07-12-2015, 01:59 PM

The girls who say yes are ugly, that’s a fact that we know,
You wouldn’t see Ace with a 10 getting blackjack at a casino.
His ace in the hole? Some mediocre lines that won’t get a win,
My ace in the hole? Sizing up the plot of land before I bury him.

vs

I'll fuckin bruise this mark..
One punch. You'll take longer to get on ur feet than a fuckin evolution chart.
Now the safety off, hammer cocked, my gun antics insane..
I'll give you the Trig work that'd put mathematics to shame.

Seemed like yall just kind of key'd them verses up I liked the casino line with better wording it was a potential haymaker and the evolution chart bar was good couldve been set up better tho. one edged it here imo v/ACE

07-06-2015, 03:29 PM	#1
Allen Knight The Bad Guys. Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 9,168 Battle Record: 106-34 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Key to Greatness I - BA Cypher Tournament - Tag Team Tournament I - Fight Night LXXVI - Time to Kill V - Fight Night LXXX - 1-2 Punch League - Fight Night Cypher II - Key Grand Prix IV - NBL Cypher (7x) - Throwdown Cypher - Netcees Battle League (2x) - BA Cypher III - Fight Night 1 - Tag Team Tournament V Rep Power: 85899398	Ace 0-0 Vs Swerve 0-0 - ACE WINS Netcees Battle League Season VIII Rules Due Dates: Verses are due Thursday, July 9th 2015 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday Battles that lack votes may close later. One sided battles may get closed early. Extensions are 24 hours Line Limit: Minimum of 10, maximum of 16 If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first For additional Rules refer to rule thread First to 5, win by at least two votes @Ace @Swerve __________________ C.O.B

07-09-2015, 05:14 PM	#4
Swerve SDub Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,877 Battle Record: 40-34 Champed - Alias Tourney III (Heroes vs. Villians) - Fight Night LXIV - Netcees Battle League Rep Power: 64920324	You probably want to post a verse. Edit: Oh and 10, I'm not wasting 6 extra. __________________ No Cap Gang. Last edited by Swerve; 07-09-2015 at 05:17 PM.

07-10-2015, 12:31 AM	#5
Swerve SDub Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,877 Battle Record: 40-34 Champed - Alias Tourney III (Heroes vs. Villians) - Fight Night LXIV - Netcees Battle League Rep Power: 64920324	Ace has to beg to get laid, I almost feel bad for the kid, Some dudes put pussy on a pedestal…he Shanghai towers the shit. The girls who say yes are ugly, that’s a fact that we know, You wouldn’t see Ace with a 10 getting blackjack at a casino. When we talk guns, this dude shits his pants lately, If the heat wave in the air, he runs inside, closes his blinds and turn on the A/C. His ace in the hole? Some mediocre lines that won’t get a win, My ace in the hole? Sizing up the plot of land before I bury him. Bullet Farm make it rain slugs, boy its gonna get dark, Closest he got to see-sawed pump action is playing at a kids park. @Ace __________________ No Cap Gang.

07-10-2015, 08:26 AM	#8
sral Shrewd as evearthed Join Date: Aug 2014 Location: Wolverhampton, England Posts: 8,274 Battle Record: 28-3 Champed - Gimmick Battle League - The Winter Topical - Topical Martyrs - Lime Green Poetry Association - Lyric Olympics - Art of Writing League - Guerrilla Writing League (2x) - Black August II Rep Power: 85899392	I hate "this quote vs this quote" voting, tbh. Swerve was cool here, Ace with a 10 was a cool idea but could have hit harder, ace in the hole too I felt pretty much the same about - nice idea, no real sting to it. Heat in the hair was slightly amusing. Ace had the evolution shit, Trig work was okay but still felt a bit flat, closer seemed alright but nothing special. Pretty boring generic fest with only the opener really hitting for me from Ace. I guess I got to edge it him, though, here. __________________ - Netcees Rebuttal Tourney - Art of Writing League (x 4) - AOWL Season 11 Champion (Undefeated Season)

07-11-2015, 04:19 PM	#12
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,033 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349679	Ace has to beg to get laid, I almost feel bad for the kid, Some dudes put pussy on a pedestal…he Shanghai towers the shit. When we talk guns, this dude shits his pants lately, If the heat wave in the air, he runs inside, closes his blinds and turn on the A/C. ^^^^ these were the stand outs from your verse, I felt what followed kinda flucked it up I laughed at the A/C line but I felt you could have used daily instead of lately... that would have sounded better to me...decent verse though I'll fuckin bruise this mark.. One punch. You'll take longer to get on ur feet than a fuckin evolution chart. This is top notch, homie. What I got in store is rude.. When YOU get in the Mix.. whack is the solvent n i'll mop the floor with you. Now the safety off, hammer cocked, my gun antics insane.. I'll give you the Trig work that'd put mathematics to shame. ^^^ these lines were pretty nice, I enjoy a verse that you have to break down I really enjoyed that 'evolution' reference to be honest, that mop line was slick too the trig line was pretty cool, some of the rest could have worked... but I think you did work... v/Ace, he delivered a harder impacting in my opinion, Swerve was cool too but I feel like had he left out the ace in the hole & came with something different it would be evenly matched other than that I got Ace winning this due to consistency __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you

07-07-2015, 12:09 AM	#2
Ace The Bad Guy Join Date: Jun 2015 Posts: 115 Battle Record: 2-1 Rep Power: 8304533	In. 16

07-09-2015, 02:33 PM	#3
Ace The Bad Guy Join Date: Jun 2015 Posts: 115 Battle Record: 2-1 Rep Power: 8304533	No Show You're a no go Slow mo Go go Po Po So low Go Pro Dough's low Mo flow Joe Schmo

07-10-2015, 12:56 AM	#6
Ace The Bad Guy Join Date: Jun 2015 Posts: 115 Battle Record: 2-1 Rep Power: 8304533	my b just saw this.. postin soon

07-10-2015, 01:29 AM	#7
Ace The Bad Guy Join Date: Jun 2015 Posts: 115 Battle Record: 2-1 Rep Power: 8304533	Aiyyo I'll fuckin bruise this mark.. One punch. You'll take longer to get on ur feet than a fuckin evolution chart. This is top notch, homie. What I got in store is rude.. When YOU get in the Mix.. whack is the solvent n i'll mop the floor with you. Screw ur crew nigga. These wannabes aint causin no harm.. What kind of dumb fuckin Hicks think they can grow Bullets out from a Farm. Now the safety off, hammer cocked, my gun antics insane.. I'll give you the Trig work that'd put mathematics to shame. Swerve used to be decent. Now theres barely any enjoyment.. Ur career didnt just missile down. Dude forgot the launch codes for the deployment. Mahfucka.

07-10-2015, 05:22 PM	#10
Useless 100% Join Date: Jul 2015 Posts: 1,803 Battle Record: 9-12 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 0	Swerve -this was an OK jab. Concept was meh but wording carries it. -this could've been dope but i thought the execution was lacking. -I thought this was a good flip. -this is already played on him but I thought it was a solid flip -another OK jab. Generic concept with good wording but still bland. Ace -decent jab...generic but a good flip -wasn't feeling this. Wack is the solvent? Nahhh -statementish and pretty much a wasted line lol -this was a mediocre jab. -meh another jab, better than the last line but it was still mediocre. I gotta give this one to swerve for better concepts, better wording and an overall better verse IMO. It was close, ace had a decent verse but he had too many mediocre and generic bars and a couple misses. Vote swerve

07-10-2015, 07:31 PM	#11
Kill Spree Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2014 Posts: 4,439 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 37645695	Ace has to beg to get laid, I almost feel bad for the kid, Some dudes put pussy on a pedestal…he Shanghai towers the shit. not feelin this The girls who say yes are ugly, that’s a fact that we know, You wouldn’t see Ace with a 10 getting blackjack at a casino. cool concept but meh When we talk guns, this dude shits his pants lately, If the heat wave in the air, he runs inside, closes his blinds and turn on the A/C. nah His ace in the hole? Some mediocre lines that won’t get a win, My ace in the hole? Sizing up the plot of land before I bury him. ok Bullet Farm make it rain slugs, boy its gonna get dark, Closest he got to see-sawed pump action is playing at a kids park. played Aiyyo I'll fuckin bruise this mark.. One punch. You'll take longer to get on ur feet than a fuckin evolution chart. concepts ok...no set up tho? This is top notch, homie. What I got in store is rude.. When YOU get in the Mix.. whack is the solvent n i'll mop the floor with you. ok Screw ur crew nigga. These wannabes aint causin no harm.. What kind of dumb fuckin Hicks think they can grow Bullets out from a Farm. no Now the safety off, hammer cocked, my gun antics insane.. I'll give you the Trig work that'd put mathematics to shame. ok Swerve used to be decent. Now theres barely any enjoyment.. Ur career didnt just missile down. Dude forgot the launch codes for the deployment. aight overall bland battle... swerve had some generic shit bad wording with one decent jab, ace had a few misses that were better but he kept it too simplbe with his set ups. but enough to take this v/Ace

07-12-2015, 07:29 AM	#13
Bust Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2015 Posts: 164 Battle Record: 5-7 Rep Power: 3710880	Swerve Opener was ok Ace wit a 10 was ok also Heat waves was weak Ace in the joke was oooooook Closer was ehh Ace Opener was cool Solvent was ok Grow bullets was ehh Trig work was ok Closer was ok Ok, swerve had a few good bars nothing real harsh just light hit that coulda been doper n ace kinda stayed consistent with jabs n Imo took this based off having a couple more land.. Good read tho Vote ace

07-12-2015, 11:28 AM	#14
Cred The Biggest Join Date: Jan 2015 Posts: 3,254 Battle Record: 67-32 Accomplishments - Gun Bar King Champed - Fight Night 3 - Fight Night 10 - Fight Night 12 - Battle Arena League Rep Power: 85899380	Blackjack & closer was alrighttt vs Opener was nasty, bullet farm This battle was alright. Expected more from both alias & swerve. Evolution was lotb shit was nasty. Vote Ace

07-12-2015, 01:59 PM	#15
Unfukwitable baz∞ka Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 1,628 Battle Record: 38-35 Champed - Fight Night 7 - Battle Arena Tournament - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 36460385	The girls who say yes are ugly, that’s a fact that we know, You wouldn’t see Ace with a 10 getting blackjack at a casino. His ace in the hole? Some mediocre lines that won’t get a win, My ace in the hole? Sizing up the plot of land before I bury him. vs I'll fuckin bruise this mark.. One punch. You'll take longer to get on ur feet than a fuckin evolution chart. Now the safety off, hammer cocked, my gun antics insane.. I'll give you the Trig work that'd put mathematics to shame. Seemed like yall just kind of key'd them verses up I liked the casino line with better wording it was a potential haymaker and the evolution chart bar was good couldve been set up better tho. one edged it here imo v/ACE __________________ WICKeD