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Old 07-08-2015, 05:56 PM   #21
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Why the need for the whole magazine article that followed though?
I think it's a recurring theme of the magazine to have an article about elements of writing, and punctuation was already being discussed so it made sense to put it in the mag.
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Why the need for the whole magazine article that followed though?
cause split has an adderall prescription obv
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Old 07-08-2015, 06:21 PM   #23
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who would you have voted for, D, if you don't mind me asking?
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Why the need for the whole magazine article that followed though?
no need

sometimes writers are subtle, if you read academic literary criticism you'd see how

Case in point: http://www.english.illinois.edu/maps...Landles10.html

I think educating people here, maybe 10% of what you throw at them sticks unless they're learning on their own

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when I write, lately, I feel as if I begin by stringing together ambient ideas and concepts, then i realize I'm just typing the words coffee, tawdry, and autumn over and over and over, again, then I pass out dru-
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Old 07-08-2015, 10:32 PM   #25
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I'd be lying through my teeth if I said I didn't pop a max legal strength Concerta before writing that mag
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Old 07-08-2015, 10:39 PM   #26
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If the mistake is clearly intentional or the writer is using slang it doesn't bother me, but if it's clear the mistake has arisen through the writer's lack of knowledge I do tend to look down on it a tad. Commas or lack or them to help the reader catch the flow are OK with me too.

Eg:

"ur verse trash dawg" instead of "your verse is trash, dog" is fine by me, but "you're verse trash dawg" isn't.
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Old 07-09-2015, 06:26 AM   #28
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@sraL: My stance on this issue (punctuation and grammar) is found scattered around the LGPA mag and chat:

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The voting and criteria in a poetry league shouldn't be the same as in a topical or any other battle and I'm going to continue to put certain things higher than others (such as punctuation in this particular league whereas I could give less of a fuck in a topical and even non-existent in a battle) and put shit to light if I think there's places the piece could be improved.
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It [punctuation] matters to me because it seems more refined and polished. The way the poem is supposed to be read translates so much better and it just gives an overall better feel to me. But I’d only put grammar and punctuation up against each other if I couldn’t choose who to vote on as a last deciding factor to my vote.
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... I definitely do not let punctuation be a determining factor unless the battle is so incredibly close I have to nitpick on the smallest of things just to find something where someone might have an edge over the other. ... I try to let my votes be as to the point and harsh as possible because nowadays a lot of people have reached a certain level the nitpicking is almost (or close to) the only things left they can improve on
Also word @Dominate with the ''your'' & ''you're'' shit. Without further adieu I'm ending the post with this:

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Old 07-09-2015, 06:33 AM   #29
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LOL at its important spell shit right
aight bet
lets cancel all these leagues and just hold a spelling b k?

or maybe we just do a words with friends tournament instead
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Old 07-09-2015, 07:37 AM   #30
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Jesus i dont know how des got lars to des tho
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Old 07-09-2015, 08:10 AM   #31
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Old 07-09-2015, 10:50 AM   #32
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I think it matters more in topical than text battling. There is a lot of Hip Hop slang, so using that in text is fine. It has to make some sense though.
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Old 07-09-2015, 12:01 PM   #33
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grammar is immensely important
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Old 07-09-2015, 12:41 PM   #34
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had no idea lars made this thread

only because

all his threads tend to begin with "LMAO"

this one didn't
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Old 07-09-2015, 12:48 PM   #35
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Its never been important to me unless the shit was totally butvhered. I believe i misspellings so that the word be pronou ced AS ITS WRITTEN to coincide with syllable matchibg and arrangement. Also to give a more slang feel and hiphop vibe to what im writing. After all. This is hiphop were talking about. Not fucking poetry and haikus and shit. What i write is meant to portray what you would hear in a cypher on a street corner or at a playground or ballcourt with a group of street sense type of hiphop lovers. So in my opinion. Punctuation and grammar are not important and should not be cause to frown upon someones work.... unless its sooo bad with mispellings that whats been written is hard to understand. Then yes. It becomes important.. but ibthink as writers and as people of intelligencewe should all know and understand when and why that line between both exists.
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lol no. punctuation can inform grammar. they're unequivocally intertwined.

even in the stricter linguistic sense for grammar, which i don't think you mean, structure is a focal point.

my first post shows how a single comma can change the meaning of an ostensibly identical phrase considerably, albeit with two homonyms, but still. to say one is worthless and the other vital doesn't work when they co-exist. ultimately we all write here, so however much we think our pengame relates to the aural, we're initially reading (not hearing).

punctuation can be used to do some clever shit. punctuation can also be misused to do some clever shit (word to whoever posted e.e. cummings). but here, on this forum, i think punctuation/grammar matter only as much as each individual (writing or critiquing) wants it to: it's their right - fuck prescribing to another's values.

so yea you're dumb. no i haven't read the battle.

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so basically need mba in english in order to vote now

is what ya' saying?
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so basically need mba in english in order to vote now

is what ya' saying?
yeah bro

that's what he's saying. you got it.

what's your address? let me mail you this here mba in reading comprehension
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