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The Clown Prince
Join Date: Apr 2013
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planets advance stance is angled distinctive discordance spangled aroma
natural coma under willow trees i capture pnuemonia.... sulfuric shorelines on low tide i walk beside em staring at the sun my laughter is slaughter to leviathans son found a way home from a zone where i begun thunderdome electric fences beyond the clouds of legends shrouded henchman phantasm style pull them guns out this was dope, I liked these sections the most...and that closing line the rest kind of threw me off, it was a lot to take in at once I suppose... maybe I'll come back & edit more in once I process it, either way... as quoted above...dope
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