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06-27-2015, 06:49 AM
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The beat was too distracting from the tone and cadence you used.
Aside from that, whatever kind of subject matter you were going on about wasn't enthralling to me. You weren't talking about anything I could relate to, and it wasn't something that evoked any kind of emotional response. Just "I'm dope and ahead of my time," kind of shit with a dead pan delivery. Keep spitting homie, you've got the basics.
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