06-22-2015, 11:04 PM | #1 |
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SHADOW BOXING - Sn00p vs Unfukwitable {Sn00p wins}
Sn00p
no prediction has HIS name in it. no matter what he threatens to do so see him in a glass ball? only if he's rolling around w/ a mutant t rex on the loose spread parts of ur body all over after i take 'em out home is where the heart is... i guess ur liver, kidneys & lungs are vagrant now & ur girl hates u. it seems u weren't even trying w/ that whore, brah... while i had that pussy so wet, it was proclaimed illegal & got fined in california molotov cocktails will kill ya if u continue talking that shit... throw bottles at ya & then dump u in the water. u'd think i was launching a ship & ur family will know what's up w/ all the fingers & toes that i send it's cut off, but they get the message. shit looks like the PM problems all over again couldn't care less about the competition. nbl power rankings show i'm the first so no, i don't know who i'm battling. & THAT won't change w/ hush posting the verse Unfukwitable If I hear another kid story, I'll have the choppa pourin; All u'll see is a bear'll blow on'em, til it reminds u of Poppas porridge. U walking around w/ $1000? I'll take that & watch u & ya girl cry; Then bounce w/ a rack so fast, I'll be the face of Hooters worldwide. Deaths around the corner & u got season passes; Run &I'm sqeezin ratchets; U'll 'get opened up after u Book'.. Thats a cliche secret passage! My Nine holds 30 shots, why lie... The clip? I left it hangin, Like I ain't return a high-five Ya craft is weak, ya bars is lame & u're straight stupid; Ur career's so trans-parent, Bruce Jenners kids can relate to it. I know mafia crews that'll do dirt, this losers screwed, I got mob-ties, U're just gonna need one of those for your funeral.
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06-23-2015, 02:38 AM | #2 |
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sn00p had some dope lines scattered throughout his whole verse
my only gripe with your verse is the california line & the launching a ship line either way I felt like your verse was the strongest one I've read so far Un, that opener was pretty slick, that papa's porridge line got some lulz outta me that mid section was kind of weak though,didn't really feel that Jenner line since it's played to death & that closer wasn't really working for me either... anyway I felt like you really held your own. I got Sn00p with this due to his verse being littered with some dope lines Un was cool but didn't have the memorable amount to win me over...nicely done fella's
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06-23-2015, 03:27 AM | #3 |
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spread parts of ur body all over after i take 'em out
home is where the heart is... i guess ur liver, kidneys & lungs are vagrant now & ur family will know what's up w/ all the fingers & toes that i send it's cut off, but they get the message. shit looks like the PM problems all over again vs. If I hear another kid story, I'll have the choppa pourin; All u'll see is a bear'll blow on'em, til it reminds u of Poppas porridge. damn... that bear'll blow on'em was fire. LOTB. Snoop had PM that was a dope way to do it & vagrant was his best it was kinda even otherwise to be honest. both had cool ones, a couple misses. Unfuk had a cpl like Trans & rack that were ok twists but coulda won wit different concepts to me... and Snoop had that one more at haymaker level so I got him in a pretty close one here, good shit to both v/Sn00p |
06-23-2015, 02:52 PM | #4 |
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Home is where the heart is, PM
Vs Popped porridge. I have to say, this was a cool battle. Both came with some nice lines and not-so-nice lines. Snoop edges this for me on one more quote. Otherwise it was even. Nice battle. |
06-23-2015, 07:12 PM | #5 |
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no prediction has HIS name in it. no matter what he threatens to do
so see him in a glass ball? only if he's rolling around w/ a mutant t rex on the loose got the reference but wasn't totally feeling it spread parts of ur body all over after i take 'em out home is where the heart is... i guess ur liver, kidneys & lungs are vagrant now yo dope & ur girl hates u. it seems u weren't even trying w/ that whore, brah... while i had that pussy so wet, it was proclaimed illegal & got fined in california cool molotov cocktails will kill ya if u continue talking that shit... throw bottles at ya & then dump u in the water. u'd think i was launching a ship ok & ur family will know what's up w/ all the fingers & toes that i send it's cut off, but they get the message. shit looks like the PM problems all over again niiice couldn't care less about the competition. nbl power rankings show i'm the first so no, i don't know who i'm battling. & THAT won't change w/ hush posting the verse eh If I hear another kid story, I'll have the choppa pourin; All u'll see is a bear'll blow on'em, til it reminds u of Poppas porridge. cool idea but not really feeling the execution U walking around w/ $1000? I'll take that & watch u & ya girl cry; Then bounce w/ a rack so fast, I'll be the face of Hooters worldwide. nice Deaths around the corner & u got season passes; Run &I'm sqeezin ratchets; U'll 'get opened up after u Book'.. Thats a cliche secret passage! lol... ok My Nine holds 30 shots, why lie... The clip? I left it hangin, Like I ain't return a high-five not really feeling it Ya craft is weak, ya bars is lame & u're straight stupid; Ur career's so trans-parent, Bruce Jenners kids can relate to it. nah I know mafia crews that'll do dirt, this losers screwed, I got mob-ties, U're just gonna need one of those for your funeral. wasnt feeling this nice battle, thought sn00p got it on consistency tho. props to both, dug the home is where the heart is line and the hooters line v/sn00p |
06-23-2015, 09:03 PM | #6 |
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Snoop
not feeling the opener. I think it's because the reg is unfamiliar to me at this time home heart was dope lol @wet pussy ship launch. Ok Pm was nasty closer eh Unfuk porridge was dooope hooter is cool book . Nah. Opened up after u book. I would have said opened up after u grab'n book Like he reached for a gun n ran. It works perfect..well not really but I would of tweaked it to where the concepts incorporates said person touching the book. Instead of just saying book. Yknow? The way u did it was forced. Opened up after u book? High 5 eh mob ties eh Fuck I thought unfuk had this His first 4 were nasty But he fell off towards the end Poppa porridge was sick tho props Uve been gettin bad draws lately. I feel as if I haven't voted for u in a long time. I'm aware of it. V/snoop
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06-24-2015, 07:38 AM | #7 |
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Vagrant, pms
vs Opener Cool quick battle here. Neither brang thst consistent heat but snoop had it 2 quotes to 1. Everything else jus fell short V - snoop |
06-24-2015, 06:15 PM | #8 |
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no prediction has HIS name in it. no matter what he threatens to do
so see him in a glass ball? only if he's rolling around w/ a mutant t rex on the loose Ehh spread parts of ur body all over after i take 'em out home is where the heart is... i guess ur liver, kidneys & lungs are vagrant now Cool & ur girl hates u. it seems u weren't even trying w/ that whore, brah... while i had that pussy so wet, it was proclaimed illegal & got fined in california Worded rough molotov cocktails will kill ya if u continue talking that shit... throw bottles at ya & then dump u in the water. u'd think i was launching a ship Slick & ur family will know what's up w/ all the fingers & toes that i send it's cut off, but they get the message. shit looks like the PM problems all over again Wordy ending should of ended it at pm but this is sick couldn't care less about the competition. nbl power rankings show i'm the first so no, i don't know who i'm battling. & THAT won't change w/ hush posting the verse This is okay Unfukwitable If I hear another kid story, I'll have the choppa pourin; All u'll see is a bear'll blow on'em, til it reminds u of Poppas porridge. This is cool U walking around w/ $1000? I'll take that & watch u & ya girl cry; Then bounce w/ a rack so fast, I'll be the face of Hooters worldwide. Lol Deaths around the corner & u got season passes; Run &I'm sqeezin ratchets; U'll 'get opened up after u Book'.. Thats a cliche secret passage! Sickk My Nine holds 30 shots, why lie... The clip? I left it hangin, Like I ain't return a high-five Good Ya craft is weak, ya bars is lame & u're straight stupid; Ur career's so trans-parent, Bruce Jenners kids can relate to it. Okay I know mafia crews that'll do dirt, this losers screwed, I got mob-ties, U're just gonna need one of those for your funeral. Solid This was decent. V un |
06-25-2015, 07:08 AM | #9 |
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Home is wear the heart is, PM problems.
vs bear'll was solid. Bounc w/ racks/hooters shit was nice and creative but more of a swag. nice battle snoop got it |
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