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Hush 06-22-2015 11:04 PM

SHADOW BOXING - Sn00p vs Unfukwitable {Sn00p wins}
 
Sn00p
no prediction has HIS name in it. no matter what he threatens to do
so see him in a glass ball? only if he's rolling around w/ a mutant t rex on the loose
spread parts of ur body all over after i take 'em out
home is where the heart is... i guess ur liver, kidneys & lungs are vagrant now
& ur girl hates u. it seems u weren't even trying w/ that whore, brah...
while i had that pussy so wet, it was proclaimed illegal & got fined in california
molotov cocktails will kill ya if u continue talking that shit...
throw bottles at ya & then dump u in the water. u'd think i was launching a ship
& ur family will know what's up w/ all the fingers & toes that i send
it's cut off, but they get the message. shit looks like the PM problems all over again
couldn't care less about the competition. nbl power rankings show i'm the first
so no, i don't know who i'm battling. & THAT won't change w/ hush posting the verse




Unfukwitable
If I hear another kid story, I'll have the choppa pourin;
All u'll see is a bear'll blow on'em, til it reminds u of Poppas porridge.
U walking around w/ $1000? I'll take that & watch u & ya girl cry;
Then bounce w/ a rack so fast, I'll be the face of Hooters worldwide.
Deaths around the corner & u got season passes;
Run &I'm sqeezin ratchets;
U'll 'get opened up after u Book'.. Thats a cliche secret passage!
My Nine holds 30 shots, why lie...
The clip? I left it hangin, Like I ain't return a high-five
Ya craft is weak, ya bars is lame & u're straight stupid;
Ur career's so trans-parent, Bruce Jenners kids can relate to it.
I know mafia crews that'll do dirt, this losers screwed,
I got mob-ties, U're just gonna need one of those for your funeral.

Mr. J 06-23-2015 02:38 AM

sn00p had some dope lines scattered throughout his whole verse
my only gripe with your verse is the california line & the launching a ship line
either way I felt like your verse was the strongest one I've read so far

Un, that opener was pretty slick, that papa's porridge line got some lulz outta me
that mid section was kind of weak though,didn't really feel that Jenner line since it's played to death & that closer wasn't really working for me either...
anyway I felt like you really held your own.

I got Sn00p with this due to his verse being littered with some dope lines
Un was cool but didn't have the memorable amount to win me over...nicely done fella's

Junto 06-23-2015 03:27 AM

spread parts of ur body all over after i take 'em out
home is where the heart is... i guess ur liver, kidneys & lungs are vagrant now

& ur family will know what's up w/ all the fingers & toes that i send
it's cut off, but they get the message. shit looks like the PM problems all over again

vs.

If I hear another kid story, I'll have the choppa pourin;
All u'll see is a bear'll blow on'em, til it reminds u of Poppas porridge.


damn... that bear'll blow on'em was fire. LOTB.
Snoop had PM that was a dope way to do it & vagrant was his best
it was kinda even otherwise to be honest. both had cool ones, a couple misses.
Unfuk had a cpl like Trans & rack that were ok twists but coulda won wit different concepts to me...
and Snoop had that one more at haymaker level so I got him in a pretty close one here, good shit to both

v/Sn00p

Tic 06-23-2015 02:52 PM

Home is where the heart is, PM

Vs

Popped porridge. I have to say, this was a cool battle. Both came with some nice lines and not-so-nice lines. Snoop edges this for me on one more quote. Otherwise it was even. Nice battle.

Sharp 06-23-2015 07:12 PM

no prediction has HIS name in it. no matter what he threatens to do
so see him in a glass ball? only if he's rolling around w/ a mutant t rex on the loose
got the reference but wasn't totally feeling it
spread parts of ur body all over after i take 'em out
home is where the heart is... i guess ur liver, kidneys & lungs are vagrant now
yo dope
& ur girl hates u. it seems u weren't even trying w/ that whore, brah...
while i had that pussy so wet, it was proclaimed illegal & got fined in california
cool
molotov cocktails will kill ya if u continue talking that shit...
throw bottles at ya & then dump u in the water. u'd think i was launching a ship
ok
& ur family will know what's up w/ all the fingers & toes that i send
it's cut off, but they get the message. shit looks like the PM problems all over again
niiice
couldn't care less about the competition. nbl power rankings show i'm the first
so no, i don't know who i'm battling. & THAT won't change w/ hush posting the verse
eh



If I hear another kid story, I'll have the choppa pourin;
All u'll see is a bear'll blow on'em, til it reminds u of Poppas porridge.
cool idea but not really feeling the execution
U walking around w/ $1000? I'll take that & watch u & ya girl cry;
Then bounce w/ a rack so fast, I'll be the face of Hooters worldwide.
nice
Deaths around the corner & u got season passes;
Run &I'm sqeezin ratchets;
U'll 'get opened up after u Book'.. Thats a cliche secret passage!
lol... ok
My Nine holds 30 shots, why lie...
The clip? I left it hangin, Like I ain't return a high-five
not really feeling it
Ya craft is weak, ya bars is lame & u're straight stupid;
Ur career's so trans-parent, Bruce Jenners kids can relate to it.
nah
I know mafia crews that'll do dirt, this losers screwed,
I got mob-ties, U're just gonna need one of those for your funeral.
wasnt feeling this


nice battle, thought sn00p got it on consistency tho. props to both, dug the home is where the heart is line and the hooters line

v/sn00p

El Muffin 06-23-2015 09:03 PM

Snoop
not feeling the opener. I think it's because the reg is unfamiliar to me at this time
home heart was dope
lol @wet pussy
ship launch. Ok

Pm was nasty
closer eh



Unfuk
porridge was dooope
hooter is cool
book . Nah. Opened up after u book. I would have said opened up after u grab'n book

Like he reached for a gun n ran. It works perfect..well not really but I would of tweaked it to where the concepts incorporates said person touching the book. Instead of just saying book. Yknow?

The way u did it was forced. Opened up after u book?
High 5 eh
mob ties eh


Fuck I thought unfuk had this

His first 4 were nasty

But he fell off towards the end

Poppa porridge was sick tho props

Uve been gettin bad draws lately. I feel as if I haven't voted for u in a long time. I'm aware of it.

V/snoop

Cred 06-24-2015 07:38 AM

Vagrant, pms

vs

Opener

Cool quick battle here. Neither brang thst consistent heat but snoop had it 2 quotes to 1. Everything else jus fell short

V - snoop

Greed 06-24-2015 06:15 PM

no prediction has HIS name in it. no matter what he threatens to do
so see him in a glass ball? only if he's rolling around w/ a mutant t rex on the loose
Ehh

spread parts of ur body all over after i take 'em out
home is where the heart is... i guess ur liver, kidneys & lungs are vagrant now
Cool

& ur girl hates u. it seems u weren't even trying w/ that whore, brah...
while i had that pussy so wet, it was proclaimed illegal & got fined in california
Worded rough

molotov cocktails will kill ya if u continue talking that shit...
throw bottles at ya & then dump u in the water. u'd think i was launching a ship
Slick

& ur family will know what's up w/ all the fingers & toes that i send
it's cut off, but they get the message. shit looks like the PM problems all over again
Wordy ending should of ended it at pm but this is sick

couldn't care less about the competition. nbl power rankings show i'm the first
so no, i don't know who i'm battling. & THAT won't change w/ hush posting the verse
This is okay



Unfukwitable
If I hear another kid story, I'll have the choppa pourin;
All u'll see is a bear'll blow on'em, til it reminds u of Poppas porridge.
This is cool

U walking around w/ $1000? I'll take that & watch u & ya girl cry;
Then bounce w/ a rack so fast, I'll be the face of Hooters worldwide.
Lol

Deaths around the corner & u got season passes;
Run &I'm sqeezin ratchets;
U'll 'get opened up after u Book'.. Thats a cliche secret passage!
Sickk

My Nine holds 30 shots, why lie...
The clip? I left it hangin, Like I ain't return a high-five
Good

Ya craft is weak, ya bars is lame & u're straight stupid;
Ur career's so trans-parent, Bruce Jenners kids can relate to it.
Okay

I know mafia crews that'll do dirt, this losers screwed,
I got mob-ties, U're just gonna need one of those for your funeral.
Solid

This was decent.

V un

Amen. 06-25-2015 07:08 AM

Home is wear the heart is, PM problems.

vs

bear'll was solid. Bounc w/ racks/hooters shit was nice and creative but more of a swag.

nice battle

snoop got it


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