_____ vs Unfukwitable - UNFUK WINS

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Fucking war? Bish you wont score a point in this game
Underscore is not only in my favor.... its litterally my name
^this is decent, but self nameplays have to be really dope to hit
Think you a soldier Beetle Bailey? Believing you clever really slayed me
Take the wit out of your name and it describes how every female treat you daily
^the idea is there, but this coulda been flipped much better. smth like, "take the wit outta ur name to make it match what every girl's been calling u for years". and maybe have another connection w/ the "take wit out". like take wit out, dumb or take wit out, brain out or smth. but u see where i'm going w/ this. i kinda feel like this w/ a lotta ur bars. like, they could be so dope becuz u got concepts and u know how to formulate them, but u never go the extra mile to make it into the top punch of the week it cud'a been. oh well. this was still decent
All yo broads is elephants and all yo songs irrelevant
Unfuckings believable as lil waynes the president
^again, kinda lazy
My lines is hella nectar, and my beats are hella mean
Altho I never doubted u'd cellar record when chances are thats the only place they'd ever be
^this cud'a been better too, but it's solid still
Ask my ncgs if they wanna see a dead body.. lead em to the spot you at
.. They be like damn son whered you find this like a hot new track
^punchline connection is decent. but why would they ask where u found it when u just fucking showed em. lol. again. this isn't even a horrible line, but u cud'a done much more w/ it, and it feels kinda lazy

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tryna call my girl a slut machine? I'll buck the thing, now he's slumbering,
KFC style!; over breast a biscuit'll make 'Gree Z' til he's left w/ a couple wings.
^lots of connections. sometimes this works rly well (see neigh's new style), but sometimes it just comes out as messy. in this instance, i think the line would'a benefitted from being more concise and just focusing on the wp. still decent tho
He's all on Karaoke's dick, this shit is queer madness!,
For men usually the box is the downfall, But in ur case it was that Kare package.
^cool
this suckas style is non-original, never read no dope writs from'ya,
so it makes sense that ur name is _______ , u're just'a mark w/ no signature.
^okay. cud'a done more w/ it
he can't stomach the pressure; fuck them gay quotes that he spits;
funny he needs the Heimlich b4 he raps, But he loves to choke on a dick.
^kinda decent, but need heimlich before he raps doesnt rly make that much sense
He's lyrically fatigued, this kid ain't winnin w/ bogus written;
Unless this fags using a selfie stick, he's unable to snap & go the distance!.
^this coulda been really dope. was still decent. but the idea is dope and the flip itself was only solid.

well, kare package was the lotb imo and the best standout. apart from that u both had some nice ideas that needed that little bit of work to be quotes. like, there were a lotta lines which had concepts that made me go, damn, this is a dope idea. but then the flip didn't live up to the potential. so yea. i know u can do it. just don't get lazy lol. anyways. i got unfuk here. like i said, he had the lotb that stood out over the rest of the lines. & that's what decided it for me. close battle, so props to both.
v/unfuk