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05-20-2015, 10:56 PM
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The Clown Prince
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I lol'd at the tag..
either way I think this was an interesting twist from the other piece the flow of this is quite consistent and is overall off kilter it looks like you been spending time reading some of Wise's rhymes (haha) otherwise it's nice to see drop more than one piece Geno welcome back to the grindstone
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