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gargamel
a violin sings my song, butterfly wings fall off
The walls bleed paint, stains, the tablecloths a loss Moth balls scatter the staircase, a frantic life Blowing bubbles shaped like the anti christ Cancers quite comfortable, smoke a box pol pots folgers crystals, snot by the polkadots my colons rotten, toilette bowl full of molten lava Ass burgers, the last word spoken today Something decayed, thawing, hope for the flavor The corpse is enormous, the shadow is in labor A dark baby was born, africa needed neighbors No favors, saliva gland dried at the core put the bones back together, god has a warrior deoxy rhibo nuecleic, dehydrated Knee high from the basement, i am his agent Cleaning supply in my thermos, comet, detergent Vomit, a lifetime supply of insurance, its worth it Babies wander the surface, carpet covered in mold Gargle the gardeners toes, footsies, pussies A deli***y in the mirror, looks to deceive Green gook in the swimming pool, zippahead in the pond genghis khan, mortar bombed, legends of nam under the crocodiles smiles, dentistry by the buck devil deep in the clutch, feeding it lunch lochness demons, speachless, bleed from its tongue little people, midgets, the evil has won |
I lol'd at the tag..
either way I think this was an interesting twist from the other piece the flow of this is quite consistent and is overall off kilter it looks like you been spending time reading some of Wise's rhymes (haha) otherwise it's nice to see drop more than one piece Geno welcome back to the grindstone |
For sure homie.
Just been playing around. Looking forward to vulgars tournament. been wanting to make a solid come back if only temporary. I think thats the spot for it |
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