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05-15-2015, 12:37 PM
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The Clown Prince
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I agree with V, I have seen better from you..
this is trying to be complex for the sake of being complex on the bright side glad to see you come through I'll be expecting more and some more raw next. the first line was a decent tongue twister keep writing there..young sister
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