ZenLand Part II

YDK · 04-18-2013, 12:56 AM

This was cool man I coulda swore I fed this on aob but I guess not lol I loved the approach you. Took wit it not a normal generic swag piece but had some strong flexin. In it. The flow was smooth an muties were good but feel the transitions from rhymes to the seperate/next rhymes could have been smoother. Overall tho it was a strong drop with a unique take, just work on the transitions an you'll have fire bruh. Good shit keep it up

04-18-2013, 12:56 AM	#1
YDK ghost in the matrix Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: Covington, KY Posts: 4,563 Battle Record: 14-25 Champed - Art of Writing League (x2) - Lime Green Poetry Association Rep Power: 8181113	This was cool man I coulda swore I fed this on aob but I guess not lol I loved the approach you. Took wit it not a normal generic swag piece but had some strong flexin. In it. The flow was smooth an muties were good but feel the transitions from rhymes to the seperate/next rhymes could have been smoother. Overall tho it was a strong drop with a unique take, just work on the transitions an you'll have fire bruh. Good shit keep it up