DEAD MAN -- DREAMWORK

Zen · 01-25-2013, 11:19 AM

Nice shit man forreal. Great flow and great concept it was definatly an easy read for me as I enjoyed the subject. Dope shit the only problem I got with it is it was too fuckin short haha.

there's not competition. i promise, don't get caught in the hype
you're not entitled to a dawn after night. let me recite -
you're not entitled to a dawn after night. losses are life,
let me recite. because i've never been the talkative type
never started a fight. never introduced my darkness to light
the perfect abortion before the father of christ
watch if you like. read if you will, don't take in it vain
and don't abandoned shelter just to stay in the rain
^^Best part imo.

Keep droppin man I gotta check out some more of your shit

01-25-2013, 11:19 AM	#6
Zen Arm the Homeless Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,102 Battle Record: 22-24 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 35079722	Nice shit man forreal. Great flow and great concept it was definatly an easy read for me as I enjoyed the subject. Dope shit the only problem I got with it is it was too fuckin short haha. there's not competition. i promise, don't get caught in the hype you're not entitled to a dawn after night. let me recite - you're not entitled to a dawn after night. losses are life, let me recite. because i've never been the talkative type never started a fight. never introduced my darkness to light the perfect abortion before the father of christ watch if you like. read if you will, don't take in it vain and don't abandoned shelter just to stay in the rain ^^Best part imo. Keep droppin man I gotta check out some more of your shit