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01-01-2015, 02:54 AM
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brkn lghts
Join Date: Jan 2015
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Hello, bane baby. This was a nice rap. The line breaks were not limiting at all and could be called arbitrary in the grand scheme of the verse. The line breaks do not matter but then why bother at all? Your vocabulary was also enjoyable, it was off the cuff and yet also erudite. I thought this verse was very probing but not very revealing.
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