All I Ask - (audio)

Loose Logic · 04-11-2013, 08:55 PM

feed link - http://artofbattling.com/showthread....LUSIONAL-FREAK

My Track - https://soundcloud.com/loose-logic/04-04-all-i-ask

Nigma · 04-11-2013, 09:03 PM

I loved the song. It dope on all levels. It was lyrically very enjoyable but you've got a really good feel for song construction as well. This had a strong presence of 'music' in it, I don't know how to explain it much better then that. As far as the lyrics went, I loved the extended metaphors of flowers and all that. You are very comfortable on the beat and you executed the small chunks of double-time really well. Overall enjoyable song, will listen again.

VENgeanc · 04-11-2013, 09:04 PM

mos def feel'n the hook on this. sing it urself? the lyrics are raw dawg, expect nothing less than good multies n deep metaphors, i like the dynamic, good presence as always, there's no need to feed ur tracks personally i know u got ur mixing n everything else down. i like the subject matter n the quips u did, stayed on beat so ain shit to say.. i have to say what's doper than this tho is Machine Gun Funk, listen'n to that track got my respect level for u up like whoa..

Loose Logic · 04-11-2013, 09:06 PM

appreciate the feed! and yeah i did sing the hook myself.

also weerrrddd at the machine gun funk comment lol.. that track was fun.. and it was only an intro for my mixtape.

VENgeanc · 04-11-2013, 09:13 PM

u made a fan out of me meng, i just replayed "let me go"... that's dayum.. where do u get ur beats from? got me all jealous of it n shit loL

Loose Logic · 04-11-2013, 09:29 PM

i just search soundclick until i find something i like. lol.. and ill start spitting a few bars to it see if it works for what im going for .. if not then i move on... for my new album im working on.. ive been tossing aside some dope beats.. just cause they dont fit the mood im trying to create

Aesthetic · 04-11-2013, 09:32 PM

DUDE fuckin sick shit man; gotta linkin park kinda feel. Very emotional and like something I will remember from this site.

dead man · 04-11-2013, 10:24 PM

pretty cool track..

not exactly a helmet tune but i could dig it

checked out a few other songs on your sc... some fire ass music man. great mic presence, writing etc.

your biggest downfall is beat selection

definitely stay up.. ima be checkin the rest of these tracks out

Loose Logic · 04-13-2013, 01:29 AM

good looks!

Sharon Peters · 04-13-2013, 10:31 PM

This shit sucked

Loose Logic · 04-14-2013, 01:03 PM

hahahahah step up your troll game. ;)

Angkor · 04-14-2013, 03:02 PM

word, i like this. everything seemed to be on point. glad to see a few audio head emerging. good shit, bruh.

Loose Logic · 04-15-2013, 08:51 PM

appreciate it!

~RustyGunZ~ · 04-15-2013, 10:45 PM

still tied for my favorite music head on boards with venom man

beat was kind of linkin park like someone ^^ said, mixed with macklemore vibe haha, it was dope though bumps

yo u had this like freeverse at a live venue, might have been a GTN event that was firrreee you know what I'm talking about?

Split · 04-15-2013, 10:57 PM

too much content for one song IMO

but if you turn up the beat more/ higher quality mixing this would be a dope track

Sharp · 04-15-2013, 11:23 PM

pretty slick, nothing to offer except nice track

Loose Logic · 04-16-2013, 12:12 AM

good looks on the feed.. lol @ too much content for one song.. never heard that one before..

and @Knucklehead ... it was probly when i was opening up for crooked i? im not sure .. i think i know what you are referring to tho

04-11-2013, 08:55 PM	#1
Loose Logic Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 29 Rep Power: 175091	All I Ask - (audio) feed link - http://artofbattling.com/showthread....LUSIONAL-FREAK My Track - https://soundcloud.com/loose-logic/04-04-all-i-ask

04-11-2013, 10:24 PM	#8
dead man living Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,485 Battle Record: 33-18 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - AOWL Season 1 - Art of Writing League - AOWL Season 4 - Write Week V - GWL Season 1 Rep Power: 77606679	pretty cool track.. not exactly a helmet tune but i could dig it checked out a few other songs on your sc... some fire ass music man. great mic presence, writing etc. your biggest downfall is beat selection definitely stay up.. ima be checkin the rest of these tracks out __________________ Zack Wicks for president

04-15-2013, 10:57 PM	#15
Split . Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 8,898 Battle Record: 27-22 Rep Power: 85899399	too much content for one song IMO but if you turn up the beat more/ higher quality mixing this would be a dope track __________________ http://split8.yolasite.com

04-11-2013, 09:03 PM	#2
Nigma The COAT... Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: BC, Canada Posts: 1,723 Battle Record: 28-20 Champed - Art of Writing League (x3) Rep Power: 4595813	I loved the song. It dope on all levels. It was lyrically very enjoyable but you've got a really good feel for song construction as well. This had a strong presence of 'music' in it, I don't know how to explain it much better then that. As far as the lyrics went, I loved the extended metaphors of flowers and all that. You are very comfortable on the beat and you executed the small chunks of double-time really well. Overall enjoyable song, will listen again.

04-11-2013, 09:04 PM	#3
VENgeanc TRAITOR TO THE CAUSE Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: User Hell Posts: 46 Rep Power: 38	mos def feel'n the hook on this. sing it urself? the lyrics are raw dawg, expect nothing less than good multies n deep metaphors, i like the dynamic, good presence as always, there's no need to feed ur tracks personally i know u got ur mixing n everything else down. i like the subject matter n the quips u did, stayed on beat so ain shit to say.. i have to say what's doper than this tho is Machine Gun Funk, listen'n to that track got my respect level for u up like whoa..

04-11-2013, 09:06 PM	#4
Loose Logic Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 29 Rep Power: 175091	appreciate the feed! and yeah i did sing the hook myself. also weerrrddd at the machine gun funk comment lol.. that track was fun.. and it was only an intro for my mixtape.

04-11-2013, 09:13 PM	#5
VENgeanc TRAITOR TO THE CAUSE Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: User Hell Posts: 46 Rep Power: 38	u made a fan out of me meng, i just replayed "let me go"... that's dayum.. where do u get ur beats from? got me all jealous of it n shit loL

04-11-2013, 09:29 PM	#6
Loose Logic Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 29 Rep Power: 175091	i just search soundclick until i find something i like. lol.. and ill start spitting a few bars to it see if it works for what im going for .. if not then i move on... for my new album im working on.. ive been tossing aside some dope beats.. just cause they dont fit the mood im trying to create

04-11-2013, 09:32 PM	#7
Aesthetic Pimp Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: N/W Posts: 1,068 Battle Record: 1-12 Rep Power: 0	DUDE fuckin sick shit man; gotta linkin park kinda feel. Very emotional and like something I will remember from this site.

04-13-2013, 01:29 AM	#9
Loose Logic Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 29 Rep Power: 175091	good looks!

04-13-2013, 10:31 PM	#10
Sharon Peters Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 7 Rep Power: 38	This shit sucked

04-14-2013, 01:03 PM	#11
Loose Logic Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 29 Rep Power: 175091	hahahahah step up your troll game. ;)

04-14-2013, 03:02 PM	#12
Angkor Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 148 Battle Record: 1-3 Rep Power: 38	word, i like this. everything seemed to be on point. glad to see a few audio head emerging. good shit, bruh.

04-15-2013, 08:51 PM	#13
Loose Logic Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 29 Rep Power: 175091	appreciate it!

04-15-2013, 10:45 PM	#14
~RustyGunZ~ (ง'̀-'́)ง Join Date: Nov 2015 Posts: 15,844 Battle Record: 52-28 Accomplishments -50+ wins Champed -Summer Classic VIII -Netcees Battle League -BA Picture -BA TagTeam -Fight Night Cypher I -Fight Night XXXV -Key Grand Prix 2018 1/2 Rep Power: 85899406	still tied for my favorite music head on boards with venom man beat was kind of linkin park like someone ^^ said, mixed with macklemore vibe haha, it was dope though bumps yo u had this like freeverse at a live venue, might have been a GTN event that was firrreee you know what I'm talking about?

04-16-2013, 12:12 AM	#17
Loose Logic Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 29 Rep Power: 175091	good looks on the feed.. lol @ too much content for one song.. never heard that one before.. and @Knucklehead ... it was probly when i was opening up for crooked i? im not sure .. i think i know what you are referring to tho