All I Ask - (audio)
 

feed link - http://artofbattling.com/showthread....LUSIONAL-FREAK

My Track - https://soundcloud.com/loose-logic/04-04-all-i-ask

I loved the song. It dope on all levels. It was lyrically very enjoyable but you've got a really good feel for song construction as well. This had a strong presence of 'music' in it, I don't know how to explain it much better then that. As far as the lyrics went, I loved the extended metaphors of flowers and all that. You are very comfortable on the beat and you executed the small chunks of double-time really well. Overall enjoyable song, will listen again.

mos def feel'n the hook on this. sing it urself? the lyrics are raw dawg, expect nothing less than good multies n deep metaphors, i like the dynamic, good presence as always, there's no need to feed ur tracks personally i know u got ur mixing n everything else down. i like the subject matter n the quips u did, stayed on beat so ain shit to say.. i have to say what's doper than this tho is Machine Gun Funk, listen'n to that track got my respect level for u up like whoa..

appreciate the feed! and yeah i did sing the hook myself.

also weerrrddd at the machine gun funk comment lol.. that track was fun.. and it was only an intro for my mixtape.

u made a fan out of me meng, i just replayed "let me go"... that's dayum.. where do u get ur beats from? got me all jealous of it n shit loL

i just search soundclick until i find something i like. lol.. and ill start spitting a few bars to it see if it works for what im going for .. if not then i move on... for my new album im working on.. ive been tossing aside some dope beats.. just cause they dont fit the mood im trying to create

DUDE fuckin sick shit man; gotta linkin park kinda feel. Very emotional and like something I will remember from this site.

pretty cool track..

not exactly a helmet tune but i could dig it


checked out a few other songs on your sc... some fire ass music man. great mic presence, writing etc.

your biggest downfall is beat selection

definitely stay up.. ima be checkin the rest of these tracks out

good looks!

This shit sucked

hahahahah step up your troll game. ;)

word, i like this. everything seemed to be on point. glad to see a few audio head emerging. good shit, bruh.

appreciate it!

still tied for my favorite music head on boards with venom man

beat was kind of linkin park like someone ^^ said, mixed with macklemore vibe haha, it was dope though bumps

yo u had this like freeverse at a live venue, might have been a GTN event that was firrreee you know what I'm talking about?

too much content for one song IMO

but if you turn up the beat more/ higher quality mixing this would be a dope track

pretty slick, nothing to offer except nice track

good looks on the feed.. lol @ too much content for one song.. never heard that one before..

and @Knucklehead ... it was probly when i was opening up for crooked i? im not sure .. i think i know what you are referring to tho