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Mr. J · 12-12-2014, 01:47 PM

I thought this was pretty cool, long as shit too...
the beginning was starting off pretty cool, but the wording was bumpy
I get what you were trying to say though, it just felt awkward to me
but as we progress I feel like you picked up and really just went all out
which I like, I enjoy the pieces when you go on non-stop because you unload a lot
you make the flow of the piece seem effortless as well as worth the wait
I feel like as you go along the weight feels like less of a burden then you just let loose more
which makes for a great Geno piece...nice work my dude

12-12-2014, 01:47 PM	#7
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	I thought this was pretty cool, long as shit too... the beginning was starting off pretty cool, but the wording was bumpy I get what you were trying to say though, it just felt awkward to me but as we progress I feel like you picked up and really just went all out which I like, I enjoy the pieces when you go on non-stop because you unload a lot you make the flow of the piece seem effortless as well as worth the wait I feel like as you go along the weight feels like less of a burden then you just let loose more which makes for a great Geno piece...nice work my dude __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you