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12-09-2014, 10:21 PM
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Your flow is butta
You transition from one rhyme to the other perfecttly and it was consistent throughout the whole verse. I also think the content of the piece was dope there were lines that was a bit predictable like the fountain of youth one but I thought it fit well on this. I personally like the gods not real better of saving yourself line I dont know why but I found this line really dope to me.
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