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12-05-2014, 05:06 PM
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The Clown Prince
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Professor Oak Confessed Theres Hope On That Stretch Of Road
Me?
I'm the alpha & omega outfitted with the doubt & the haters a fresh spin that blew away the dust that surrounded your sega I run this shit to the point that I make cardio an art Sending shells up your rainbow road this ain't Mario Kart this is a scar to your heart, a pacemaker next to a microwave potent with the dialogue, my recreation is Hitchcock in his Psycho days you recycle? Great! Reviving dying text in Christian fashion Literally sucking the life out of the OM with your lipstick smacking I depicted action, you tip toe behind the curtains, silent so pipe down lighters up its another sad song, you better than me? That's a riot...Mike Brown I laugh til my sides out..and these shots hit you like a Kennedy scam you tight jean wearing nut huggers have no aim...Yosemite Sam you'll get it eventually fam, I set flame to ya crew & ya written works... all them high hopes & hot air dont you know what happened to the Hindenberg? Whatever..get your gimmicks worth, pave the way for the ridicule Another throw away verse that came jam packed with the syllables the cliches, the typical...I told em...they still buy it...
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12-05-2014, 05:47 PM
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nok Su kow
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Sold. Dope. High five.
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12-07-2014, 05:56 PM
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Damn, you've improved a lot since the last piece I read from you. Good shit.
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12-07-2014, 08:33 PM
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i spy a Hindenburg reference!!
nice drop. i like the obscure references my typeofthing
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12-09-2014, 07:52 AM
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I'm diggin this...felt like the content was kinda bouncin' around..thought halfway you were gonna start directing at recycled pieces ruining the OM but.. still this was a good read...I like the Mike Brown, Hindenburg...even the Y Sam flips...
good writing, and you dead on wit' the jam packed wit syllables..thats what made this seem so smooth Nice HoLLa |
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12-09-2014, 10:44 PM
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Do what is right.
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Really cool nice flow cool references.
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12-12-2014, 02:00 PM
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The Clown Prince
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thanks brehs
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