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Mr. J 12-05-2014 05:06 PM

Professor Oak Confessed Theres Hope On That Stretch Of Road
 
Me?



I'm the alpha & omega outfitted with the doubt & the haters
a fresh spin that blew away the dust that surrounded your sega
I run this shit to the point that I make cardio an art
Sending shells up your rainbow road this ain't Mario Kart
this is a scar to your heart, a pacemaker next to a microwave
potent with the dialogue, my recreation is Hitchcock in his Psycho days
you recycle? Great! Reviving dying text in Christian fashion
Literally sucking the life out of the OM with your lipstick smacking
I depicted action, you tip toe behind the curtains, silent so pipe down
lighters up its another sad song, you better than me? That's a riot...Mike Brown
I laugh til my sides out..and these shots hit you like a Kennedy scam
you tight jean wearing nut huggers have no aim...Yosemite Sam
you'll get it eventually fam, I set flame to ya crew & ya written works...
all them high hopes & hot air dont you know what happened to the Hindenberg?
Whatever..get your gimmicks worth, pave the way for the ridicule
Another throw away verse that came jam packed with the syllables
the cliches, the typical...I told em...they still buy it...

Wise Wiggles 12-05-2014 05:47 PM

Sold. Dope. High five.

Objective 12-07-2014 05:56 PM

Damn, you've improved a lot since the last piece I read from you. Good shit.

El Muffin 12-07-2014 08:33 PM

i spy a Hindenburg reference!!

nice drop.

i like the obscure references

my typeofthing

Kin 12-09-2014 07:52 AM

I'm diggin this...felt like the content was kinda bouncin' around..thought halfway you were gonna start directing at recycled pieces ruining the OM but.. still this was a good read...I like the Mike Brown, Hindenburg...even the Y Sam flips...

good writing, and you dead on wit' the jam packed wit syllables..thats what made this seem so smooth

Nice

HoLLa

KennyCerealBowl 12-09-2014 10:44 PM

Really cool nice flow cool references.

Mr. J 12-12-2014 02:00 PM

thanks brehs


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