ZenLand Part II

CopyPat · 04-11-2013, 02:17 AM

craziness man. you def swinging around some nice vocab on some crazy multies and complexity. very interesting to read, this is skillfull work. i liked the last half when the pace sped up and you kinda just got on a rant and let off some steam. dopeness. u had some good slanting too like: enemies to industires.. works well.. there were a couple parts that weren't EXACTLY perfect like missing a syllable but thats getting picky. this is really good shit man. enjoying ur pieces here so far. you ever get on aim to keystyle or anything? at the very least u should drop some in the cypher section

04-11-2013, 02:17 AM	#5
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 708 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742225	craziness man. you def swinging around some nice vocab on some crazy multies and complexity. very interesting to read, this is skillfull work. i liked the last half when the pace sped up and you kinda just got on a rant and let off some steam. dopeness. u had some good slanting too like: enemies to industires.. works well.. there were a couple parts that weren't EXACTLY perfect like missing a syllable but thats getting picky. this is really good shit man. enjoying ur pieces here so far. you ever get on aim to keystyle or anything? at the very least u should drop some in the cypher section