Tic Tac 1-0 vs SpookyDeep 1-0 {Tic Tac wins, SpookyDeep is DQ'd for biting}

Orc · 11-25-2014, 03:45 PM

You’re never touchin a Weapon, just admit you’re a herb
Last time you Sparked the Chrome was pulling into a spot & hittin the curb
okay. it's hard to make this type of phrase fresh due to the chromes aspect.
shoulda said spark something else. it was okay tho the flip worked and it was a nice enough jab.
I tried to be Civil, but one shot & this guy will hit the floor
So trust it’s not Politics when I hit Spook with more Rights than 1964
this is a great flip. good. smooth.
You say you’re Black, but to me it seems like something don’t go
Because every post you make lets more & more Whiteout like Buffalo snow
i looked it up and i get it. it's not really harsh tho
I’m comin Fresh Off pussy, he spends his days in the park just lookin at hoes
Ya bitch wanted it, Deep…so I ended up so Foreign I still had one foot in the Boat
far in & foreign is forced to me man. i didn't like the concept or flip anyway tho. too much going on. keep it short and concise.
Ya nothing but stupid bro, w/ those gun bars what the fuck are you provin tho?
So if Spook is Thug to the Corey Gunz Blazin…it’s just < that faggot lightin up in the studio
forced & too much going on

sometimes you've got the style down but other times you veer back to the longbar way of cramming a lot of shit in to make it seem cleverer. just keep it short, sweet, & harsh. you have the potential to be dope af it's just the longbar tendencies holding you back. more bars like the politics & whiteout line (more so the wording on the last one not quite the flip). anyway decent enough verse man

11-25-2014, 03:45 PM	#5
Orc Certified Mother’s Boy Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 5,163 Battle Record: 5-1 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - NBL Season 4 - GBL Season 1 - Lyric Olympics - Fight Night LXVI - Fight Night LX - Fight Night (3x) - NBL Picture Roast - Netcees Battle League (8x) - NBL Picture League - Gimmick Battle League - BA Tag Team - 1-2 Punch League - NBL Cypher (3x) - Battle Arena League - OM HOF (2x) Rep Power: 85899393	You’re never touchin a Weapon, just admit you’re a herb Last time you Sparked the Chrome was pulling into a spot & hittin the curb okay. it's hard to make this type of phrase fresh due to the chromes aspect. shoulda said spark something else. it was okay tho the flip worked and it was a nice enough jab. I tried to be Civil, but one shot & this guy will hit the floor So trust it’s not Politics when I hit Spook with more Rights than 1964 this is a great flip. good. smooth. You say you’re Black, but to me it seems like something don’t go Because every post you make lets more & more Whiteout like Buffalo snow i looked it up and i get it. it's not really harsh tho I’m comin Fresh Off pussy, he spends his days in the park just lookin at hoes Ya bitch wanted it, Deep…so I ended up so Foreign I still had one foot in the Boat far in & foreign is forced to me man. i didn't like the concept or flip anyway tho. too much going on. keep it short and concise. Ya nothing but stupid bro, w/ those gun bars what the fuck are you provin tho? So if Spook is Thug to the Corey Gunz Blazin…it’s just < that faggot lightin up in the studio forced & too much going on sometimes you've got the style down but other times you veer back to the longbar way of cramming a lot of shit in to make it seem cleverer. just keep it short, sweet, & harsh. you have the potential to be dope af it's just the longbar tendencies holding you back. more bars like the politics & whiteout line (more so the wording on the last one not quite the flip). anyway decent enough verse man