Tic Tac 1-0 vs SpookyDeep 1-0 {Tic Tac wins, SpookyDeep is DQ'd for biting}
 

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Thursday, November 20th 2014 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
• EXTENSIONS ARE LIMITED - IF YOU USE YOURS IT WILL BE NOTED
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

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First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!

@Tic Tac @SpookyDeep

In for 10 or 12.

10...

Lol @ your gun bars............

You’re never touchin a Weapon, just admit you’re a herb
Last time you Sparked the Chrome was pulling into a spot & hittin the curb
I tried to be Civil, but one shot & this guy will hit the floor
So trust it’s not Politics when I hit Spook with more Rights than 1964
You say you’re Black, but to me it seems like something don’t go
Because every post you make lets more & more Whiteout like Buffalo snow
I’m comin Fresh Off pussy, he spends his days in the park just lookin at hoes
Ya bitch wanted it, Deep…so I ended up so Foreign I still had one foot in the Boat
Ya nothing but stupid bro, w/ those gun bars what the fuck are you provin tho?
So if Spook is Thug to the Corey Gunz Blazin…it’s just < that faggot lightin up in the studio
@SpookyDeep

I thro 1-2's in odd ways that's sure to have his lungs bleed
Your 1-2's couldn't even beat odd ways in the punch league
Leave his forehead rearranged when the guns shooting and blazing
And see the chin in difference places like big baby was movin locations
Winning newb tournys is shallow, & you'll never be speaking in depth
He'll never be at the high end, cause the big break lingers deep in his head
I'll leave his corpse in the street, even my fillers show that im awesome at keys
So when the punches land in the wrong time...don't think immigrants caught by border police
I'll LOCK Tic up, throw him in a lake... It's too late for the doctor
The only brush with great ness he's had......he was painting the monster

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tic's verse is open for feed

Only liked the first 2 bars from Tac. 3rd bar had potential, rest either didnt connect that well or just didnt understand

V-Tic

You’re never touchin a Weapon, just admit you’re a herb
Last time you Sparked the Chrome was pulling into a spot & hittin the curb
okay. it's hard to make this type of phrase fresh due to the chromes aspect.
shoulda said spark something else. it was okay tho the flip worked and it was a nice enough jab.
I tried to be Civil, but one shot & this guy will hit the floor
So trust it’s not Politics when I hit Spook with more Rights than 1964
this is a great flip. good. smooth.
You say you’re Black, but to me it seems like something don’t go
Because every post you make lets more & more Whiteout like Buffalo snow
i looked it up and i get it. it's not really harsh tho
I’m comin Fresh Off pussy, he spends his days in the park just lookin at hoes
Ya bitch wanted it, Deep…so I ended up so Foreign I still had one foot in the Boat
far in & foreign is forced to me man. i didn't like the concept or flip anyway tho. too much going on. keep it short and concise.
Ya nothing but stupid bro, w/ those gun bars what the fuck are you provin tho?
So if Spook is Thug to the Corey Gunz Blazin…it’s just < that faggot lightin up in the studio
forced & too much going on

sometimes you've got the style down but other times you veer back to the longbar way of cramming a lot of shit in to make it seem cleverer. just keep it short, sweet, & harsh. you have the potential to be dope af it's just the longbar tendencies holding you back. more bars like the politics & whiteout line (more so the wording on the last one not quite the flip). anyway decent enough verse man

As textcees ppl forget shit has to be somewhat spittable unless you just do it fast. You can keep your syllables even or under 15 the verse might be smoother. Your at 20 plus to often you got to get to the point quicker. i personally think for some ppl it doesnt matter there filler is entertaining enough. Spook 64 line was dope.

I liked the1964 line.
Spark the chrome was a cool flip to me.

Foreign n Corey were forced to me tho.

I thought the spook with rights line was really solid, the rest was either kind of forced or just eh. For example, the spark the chrome bar was just eh....the rest were forced and buffalo line connection was weak....definitely needed something more. Cool verse.