Death Rattle

Frank · 04-08-2013, 07:12 PM

Hell of a verse. Exceptional work right here. The flow was clean as spring water. Piece screamed unity. Really good stuff here. Well written. The piece was well written. You know when you know a piece is well written is when you look at the computer screen and scan the verse and some of the words start looking like script in places. Like a blurr.

To march for seeds sprouted of dew harboured in breeze.
Seek through flesh carved, renewed harvest an leaves,

heavy earth tone

04-08-2013, 07:12 PM	#2
Frank Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 3,228 Champed - NWL Season 2 - Art of Writing League (5x) - Lime Green Poetry Association - AOWL Season 6 - AOWL Season 10 Rep Power: 3853347	Hell of a verse. Exceptional work right here. The flow was clean as spring water. Piece screamed unity. Really good stuff here. Well written. The piece was well written. You know when you know a piece is well written is when you look at the computer screen and scan the verse and some of the words start looking like script in places. Like a blurr. To march for seeds sprouted of dew harboured in breeze. Seek through flesh carved, renewed harvest an leaves, heavy earth tone __________________ *VETWORK*