The Crazy Never Die

Dominate · 10-14-2014, 12:54 PM

Fun verse, easy reading, hilarious in parts - lmao @ crying himself to sleep after jerking it. You're great at this humorous style of writing - certainly I would be looking to you as an example if I were to attempt a humorous verse. Your rhyme schemes are very good, too. I do agree with Certain that an equally well written verse that explored the two different lifestyles in a more impartial way - considering the pros and the cons of each - may have trumped you. But maybe not. Hard to imagine how you'd incorporate that with such a humorous take as you did. Anyway, it was a great verse. Fun to read.

10-14-2014, 12:54 PM	#7
Dominate Tread Lightly. Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 2,533 Battle Record: 26-9 Champed - Netcees Battle League - Battle Arena - Tag Team Tournament III - Tag Tournament: "Omicron Variant" Rep Power: 18197460	Fun verse, easy reading, hilarious in parts - lmao @ crying himself to sleep after jerking it. You're great at this humorous style of writing - certainly I would be looking to you as an example if I were to attempt a humorous verse. Your rhyme schemes are very good, too. I do agree with Certain that an equally well written verse that explored the two different lifestyles in a more impartial way - considering the pros and the cons of each - may have trumped you. But maybe not. Hard to imagine how you'd incorporate that with such a humorous take as you did. Anyway, it was a great verse. Fun to read. __________________ The Bad Guys