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10-11-2014, 11:09 PM
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Yes that couplet does sound better with that middle line omitted, lol. Also I write everything in one venture, not in segments, perhaps I was morose inspired at the beginning. Thanks for reading my buddy from the digital world. Last edited by UnbornBuddha; 10-11-2014 at 11:12 PM. |
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