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10-02-2014, 10:58 AM
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Very well-written. Perfect, almost.
Filling ending (most plot twisters tend to leave you with an almost anti-climatic conclusion), elegant structure, and I fancied the wording. ** NOTE: This is a prime example of how grammatically correct pieces carry THAT MUCH more properness to them and leave you with a better understanding of what is going on. Well done. Very enjoyable. |
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