"The Blacklantic Situation"

Split · 09-23-2014, 01:36 AM

This was great. Part of me wish it had been a more cohesive story, but when you were experimenting with your style and being more plot-oriented, a lot of your complexities were left sorely unexplored. You've been heavily slept on the past few months. Your writing has been a bit more jumpy and a little less metaphyiscal since the last season of AOWL, but I feel as if you have returned from a great meditation with a sense of zen only you could give yourself in an era of flux. A fulcrum at the tipping of the scales. Not playing it safe, just letting a balancing act run its course. I'd be more specific with regards to this verse but I feel as if quotes and criticism couldn't demonstrate what I'm saying any better, so just, welcome back.

09-23-2014, 01:36 AM	#4
Split . Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 8,898 Battle Record: 27-22 Rep Power: 85899399	This was great. Part of me wish it had been a more cohesive story, but when you were experimenting with your style and being more plot-oriented, a lot of your complexities were left sorely unexplored. You've been heavily slept on the past few months. Your writing has been a bit more jumpy and a little less metaphyiscal since the last season of AOWL, but I feel as if you have returned from a great meditation with a sense of zen only you could give yourself in an era of flux. A fulcrum at the tipping of the scales. Not playing it safe, just letting a balancing act run its course. I'd be more specific with regards to this verse but I feel as if quotes and criticism couldn't demonstrate what I'm saying any better, so just, welcome back. __________________ http://split8.yolasite.com