Packed Graves vs. Tomb [Packed Graves Wins]

[theMuzzl3]

Originally Posted by Packed Graves

you can't take a stab at me, so why would this kid bother
the battle just isn't going to Pan out for you, but I promise youll leave like his father

I'm not sure if "this brother" was supposed to be "his brother… or if "his father" was supposed to be "your father". The over-all punch was good, but the structure was lacking. The 2nd line should have come closer to matching the length of the 2nd line. The content was good, though.

Originally Posted by Tomb

Seen ur "new style" on RB, learned from a University? Shit not servin me
When it's Gallaudet! Payin them student loans resulted into his tag semis entry

I'm not sure what RB is, but I'm goon assume its a rap forums… internet slang told me it meant "random boner", lol. Had to look up gallaudet, and I love it when I learn new words. The content was good, it flowed decently.

This was close, but I'm gonna:

/v Tomb