Packed Graves vs. Tomb [Packed Graves Wins]
 

Due Monday 12am PST

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Packed Graves Vs Tomb aka your funeral awaits.




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@Tomb dont forget to post.

you can't take a stab at me, so why would this kid bother
the battle just isn't going to Pan out for you, but I promise youll leave like his father

Seen ur "new style" on RB, learned from a University? Shit not servin me
When it's Gallaudet! Payin them student loans resulted into his tag semis entry

I got graves here
I think tomb just tried to do too much

I feel Tomb had the stronger and more entertaining bar easily. Graves had a very played concept in the "leave as fathers do" concept and it was smh worthy, and it was merely a braggadocio threat and not really a landing punch IMO. Tomb on the other hand had an effective personal punch that was fresher and direct. His only problem was the line was a little too wordy.

V/ Tomb

v/Graves


I get what tomb was goin 4..thought the execution was forced

gimme a pronounciation when u see this nxt time

mk sure im judging right

packed was decent

I'm not sure if "this brother" was supposed to be "his brother… or if "his father" was supposed to be "your father". The over-all punch was good, but the structure was lacking. The 2nd line should have come closer to matching the length of the 2nd line. The content was good, though.

I'm not sure what RB is, but I'm goon assume its a rap forums… internet slang told me it meant "random boner", lol. Had to look up gallaudet, and I love it when I learn new words. The content was good, it flowed decently.

This was close, but I'm gonna:

/v Tomb

Graves....solid...I followed that shit too...relevant punch plus dope flip wit it

Tomb...u tryna do a lot wit only 2 bars....creative no doubt....juz tryna force the punch out...

Vote P.G...13

ok punch vs good attempt
mvgt PG

I think PG did a better job of executing a relevent concept. He had a smooth delivery while Tomb had a potentially great personal but his execution hurt his bar alot. I'll do complete breakdowns next week.

v-PG

Pg's bar was cool. Deff clever and was executed smoothly. I liked tombs idea but felt it wasn't set up well tbh.

Vote pg

looks like tomb lost his wording here.
it started cool but he fell off with very
bad over wording with no rhyme.


vote: Packed Graves

Packed was crisper.

Tom's wording was a lil jumbled.

V packed

wordplay nowadays is hard to do unless it sounds EXACTLY like the word sounds and makes sense both ways... anyway, both had okay bars but Packed had a little more impact.. slightly

v: packed

PGs line was solid
Tomb bad a good concept w/ the wp
But it came out choppy
Vote packed

nah ion wanna hear that shit. niggas back on that forced shit all day.

the ppl who were crusading for perfection in wp now are the main culprits smfh

Im with you Muff... but believe me i've lost battles cause my wp didn't sound exactly like how a professor would read the word even though I don't talk anything like that

shit it happened to me in the Summer Classic

lol I had ppl read "laudanum" and think the wordplay was "loading um". It was "laudin(g) (th)em'", pronounced and used precisely as you would say it/define it.