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Old 09-15-2014, 03:16 PM   #1
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he facts is well, i got this virus waiting and guerrero gets annihilated
why try my patience? if camp shut down, health codes was violated
the quiet neighbor, i've been felt by ya bae and lawd, the chic a slut
dog, give it up cuz ya text is quite the same, soft as ya bitches touch
ya defenses sus, i'll beat ya ass before the season pass, what now?
since he got weaker snaps, his scores receiving flags til touch down

vs

You don't hit bitches, party hard, or even smoke up, sad to say...
Everything about you's got nerd written all over, yur worse than muzzles resume
Yur not a spitta at all, hoe retire them flows cos yur losin more respect...
So watch me killa cam with a my range rover while bumpin some dip set

I liked Camp's flow throughout and thought that was what made his verse hit harder and it stood out to me. Touche had the "unfortunate events" concept but the "Final destination" punch made it weaker. i thought it would have something to do with the book series, or the movie with jim carry.

good verses from both.

Camp edged it.
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