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Camp Bell vs Touche Guerrero - TOUCHE WINS
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@Camp Bell @Touche Guerrero |
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12?
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@Camp Bell
When I walk in the door n' he sees me, you know camp is feelin doom... Cos once I fire shots you'll see Bell hop n' carry my luggage to the room It ain't nothin to cut this bitch off, I kill phonies like you cos see... If anyone said you bought a new K camp then we know ur pussy ass cashed out his cd Ya text career is unfortunate, so far every battle you've had is for the takin... Cos you've got enough unfortunate events in your verse to script a new Final Destination You don't hit bitches, party hard, or even smoke up, sad to say... Everything about you's got nerd written all over, yur worse than muzzles resume My skills could be in Mayweather's gym, check my Knucks pussy you know it's true... I'm a top contender with the punches, while Jilti made it hard to say for you Yur not a spitta at all, hoe retire them flows cos yur losin more respect... So watch me killa cam with a my range rover while bumpin some dip set |
his scripts a scam, this chump wont grip the ham, he's wack as hell
listen man, i be busting wicked cans, while you sipping the apple ale the facts is well, i got this virus waiting and guerrero gets annihilated why try my patience? if camp shut down, health codes was violated the quiet neighbor, i've been felt by ya bae and lawd, the chic a slut dog, give it up cuz ya text is quite the same, soft as ya bitches touch ya defenses sus, i'll beat ya ass before the season pass, what now? since he got weaker snaps, his scores receiving flags til touch down sit son out, my lines be more explosive than dumb filler, i'm way nice this touch, is to just enforce it: he was given the cut written to ray rice i got dumb hitters that just came to light, this was too easy if i do say fuck filler and fake lines, i almost employed the waterboy to boo che' |
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Campbell had a cool line with the health codes. The other lines were worded awkwardly to me and didn't really hit. Touche had better misses. Vote - Touche |
U don't have to accept this of u don't accept crew votes but I'm being honest
When I walk in the door n' he sees me, you know camp is feelin doom... Cos once I fire shots you'll see Bell hop n' carry my luggage to the room Lol k It ain't nothin to cut this bitch off, I kill phonies like you cos see... If anyone said you bought a new K camp then we know ur pussy ass cashed out his cd Ok wording was off tho Ya text career is unfortunate, so far every battle you've had is for the takin... Cos you've got enough unfortunate events in your verse to script a new Final Destination Decent You don't hit bitches, party hard, or even smoke up, sad to say... Everything about you's got nerd written all over, yur worse than muzzles resume Lol dope for a noob sure funny u know what goes on here.. Hmm My skills could be in Mayweather's gym, check my Knucks pussy you know it's true... I'm a top contender with the punches, while Jilti made it hard to say for you Lol Yur not a spitta at all, hoe retire them flows cos yur losin more respect... So watch me killa cam with a my range rover while bumpin some dip set Bes bar, nice ---- his scripts a scam, this chump wont grip the ham, he's wack as hell listen man, i be busting wicked cans, while you sipping the apple ale Dope flow okay the facts is well, i got this virus waiting and guerrero gets annihilated why try my patience? if camp shut down, health codes was violated Nice the quiet neighbor, i've been felt by ya bae and lawd, the chic a slut dog, give it up cuz ya text is quite the same, soft as ya bitches touch Wording was off ya defenses sus, i'll beat ya ass before the season pass, what now? since he got weaker snaps, his scores receiving flags til touch down Lol sick sit son out, my lines be more explosive than dumb filler, i'm way nice this touch, is to just enforce it: he was given the cut written to ray rice Good concept, could of been worded better i got dumb hitters that just came to light, this was too easy if i do say fuck filler and fake lines, i almost employed the waterboy to boo che' Lotb Vote - camp Had more hits, more entertaining |
Touche
Ya text career is unfortunate, so far every battle you've had is for the takin... Cos you've got enough unfortunate events in your verse to script a new Final Destination You don't hit bitches, party hard, or even smoke up, sad to say... Everything about you's got nerd written all over, yur worse than muzzles resume Vs the facts is well, i got this virus waiting and guerrero gets annihilated why try my patience? if camp shut down, health codes was violated Overall both reads were kinda wordy more on camps part for me. He had some dope concepts but wording took sting away. Touches verse was a bit smoother for me and had some humor. His misses were better than camps IMO Vote touch |
When I walk in the door n' he sees me, you know camp is feelin doom...
Cos once I fire shots you'll see Bell hop n' carry my luggage to the room My skills could be in Mayweather's gym, check my Knucks pussy you know it's true... I'm a top contender with the punches, while Jilti made it hard to say for you Vs the facts is well, i got this virus waiting and guerrero gets annihilated why try my patience? if camp shut down, health codes was violated the quiet neighbor, i've been felt by ya bae and lawd, the chic a slut dog, give it up cuz ya text is quite the same, soft as ya bitches touch ya defenses sus, i'll beat ya ass before the season pass, what now? since he got weaker snaps, his scores receiving flags til touch down i got dumb hitters that just came to light, this was too easy if i do say fuck filler and fake lines, i almost employed the waterboy to boo che' I think Touché took bar 1 and 2 and the 5th bar but I got Camp taking bars 3, 4, and 6. So since I also feel they even in just about every cat I think although both textcees bars were hard hitting I feel camp's humor gave him an advantage, and in the bars that camp won he feel he had slightly better connectivity than touché. Enjoyment also went more towards camp. V/ Camp ( but just by a hair) |
When I walk in the door n' he sees me, you know camp is feelin doom...
Cos once I fire shots you'll see Bell hop n' carry my luggage to the room You don't hit bitches, party hard, or even smoke up, sad to say... Everything about you's got nerd written all over, yur worse than muzzles resume vs the facts is well, i got this virus waiting and guerrero gets annihilated why try my patience? if camp shut down, health codes was violated V/ touche, this was a close one but i felt tg had a more consistent verse almost quoted the final destination bar but its way to played concept that coulda been flipped better, camp had more misses but not a bad verse, props yah'll. |
I concur with Allen that Touche got this one.
Both weren't bad but I felt camp had more misses. Also a big factor for me was not getting some of camps references while I got most of Touches, its probably a cultural thing as I'm not American and don't wathc their sports. |
he facts is well, i got this virus waiting and guerrero gets annihilated
why try my patience? if camp shut down, health codes was violated the quiet neighbor, i've been felt by ya bae and lawd, the chic a slut dog, give it up cuz ya text is quite the same, soft as ya bitches touch ya defenses sus, i'll beat ya ass before the season pass, what now? since he got weaker snaps, his scores receiving flags til touch down vs You don't hit bitches, party hard, or even smoke up, sad to say... Everything about you's got nerd written all over, yur worse than muzzles resume Yur not a spitta at all, hoe retire them flows cos yur losin more respect... So watch me killa cam with a my range rover while bumpin some dip set I liked Camp's flow throughout and thought that was what made his verse hit harder and it stood out to me. Touche had the "unfortunate events" concept but the "Final destination" punch made it weaker. i thought it would have something to do with the book series, or the movie with jim carry. good verses from both. Camp edged it. |
It ain't nothin to cut this bitch off, I kill phonies like you cos see...
If anyone said you bought a new K camp then we know ur pussy ass cashed out his cd You don't hit bitches, party hard, or even smoke up, sad to say... Everything about you's got nerd written all over, yur worse than muzzles resume vs the facts is well, i got this virus waiting and guerrero gets annihilated why try my patience? if camp shut down, health codes was violated ya defenses sus, i'll beat ya ass before the season pass, what now? since he got weaker snaps, his scores receiving flags til touch down i got dumb hitters that just came to light, this was too easy if i do say fuck filler and fake lines, i almost employed the waterboy to boo che' One had less misses and had the best line of the battle close match, both couldve gotten alil more creative tho.. v/Camp |
Liked touches opener
2nd line seemed like filler to me honestly And the muzzle reference Thought final destination was too old tbh Thiught the jilty line had the wording off which took away from the Effectiveness of it And the killa cam punch I thought wasn't very creative and was a miss for me as well Vs Everyone liked the camp shut down line but honestly I think if he woulda used it, it woulda been labeled played And I just want a fan of it, Apple ale was a miss to me as it Wasn't very hard hitting IMO touch down was a miss also because his ne is too shay So touch and that don't work ray rice was a concept that's been Abused this week. Boo che was cool but like I said u can't have a che/shay Wordplay and then a touch one cuz obviously one won't work . 2-1 vote. TG |
5-4 touche
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This was a close one, Touche Guerrero's lines were much more insulting IMO, which is I guess what battling is all about… but over-all, I'm gonna have to: /v Camp Bell |
When I walk in the door n' he sees me, you know camp is feelin doom...
Cos once I fire shots you'll see Bell hop n' carry my luggage to the room seen this against him It ain't nothin to cut this bitch off, I kill phonies like you cos see... If anyone said you bought a new K camp then we know ur pussy ass cashed out his cd ok Ya text career is unfortunate, so far every battle you've had is for the takin... Cos you've got enough unfortunate events in your verse to script a new Final Destination ok You don't hit bitches, party hard, or even smoke up, sad to say... Everything about you's got nerd written all over, yur worse than muzzles resume ok My skills could be in Mayweather's gym, check my Knucks pussy you know it's true... I'm a top contender with the punches, while Jilti made it hard to say for you if there was a flip or anything I missed it Yur not a spitta at all, hoe retire them flows cos yur losin more respect... So watch me killa cam with a my range rover while bumpin some dip set cool his scripts a scam, this chump wont grip the ham, he's wack as hell listen man, i be busting wicked cans, while you sipping the apple ale eh the facts is well, i got this virus waiting and guerrero gets annihilated why try my patience? if camp shut down, health codes was violated cool the quiet neighbor, i've been felt by ya bae and lawd, the chic a slut dog, give it up cuz ya text is quite the same, soft as ya bitches touch eh ya defenses sus, i'll beat ya ass before the season pass, what now? since he got weaker snaps, his scores receiving flags til touch down ok sit son out, my lines be more explosive than dumb filler, i'm way nice this touch, is to just enforce it: he was given the cut written to ray rice cluttered wording i got dumb hitters that just came to light, this was too easy if i do say fuck filler and fake lines, i almost employed the waterboy to boo che' get the flip but it didn't really hit for me this was mad close but I think touche edged it, thought he was more consistent and his two bigger hits (final destination and killa cam) outweighed camp's (health codes and touch down). props to both guys v/touche |
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v-Camp |
Guerreros concepts came across smoother.
Camp,imo , triedd to multi too much, which took away from the clarity of the punches. Top lines: guerr. Opener.muzzle. jilti personal. Camp. Boo che n health code. V guerro for better wording , concepts n clarity |
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