Contrast or Conrads?

Adonis · 08-30-2014, 02:34 AM

hmm...Good shit bro. I miss your stories. Like that dinner of death; the round table. Youve produced some really dope verses, all of which have been short. I wish you would focus more on a single verse, just fleshing that shit out and making it epic, yet keeping your signature free flowing, "key style esque" flow. This was a decent track with a few good bars, which was needed considering the length. But there were a few lines that simply weren't as good. Keep, doing you Old Timer

08-30-2014, 02:34 AM	#4
Adonis Tsk Tsk Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: Beer Goggles Posts: 4,834 Battle Record: 36-34 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - NFL Pick'em 2016-17 Rep Power: 9946449	hmm...Good shit bro. I miss your stories. Like that dinner of death; the round table. Youve produced some really dope verses, all of which have been short. I wish you would focus more on a single verse, just fleshing that shit out and making it epic, yet keeping your signature free flowing, "key style esque" flow. This was a decent track with a few good bars, which was needed considering the length. But there were a few lines that simply weren't as good. Keep, doing you Old Timer __________________ I'm tryna fuck like A-don-is TUPAC SHAKUR