Contrast or Conrads?
 

I'm...twisted in a vision mixed with the emissions
admittin' I'm very different when my state of thoughts missin'
addicted to the high but when I'm lifted I'll dip in
do the salsa with a midget until my erection kicks in
tips him over and I get blamed for gettin' to the point
I'm driven with joy but I hate the absurd scriptures deployed
I'm gettin' annoyed but after a hour I dismiss it as coy
enjoy the minutes when I'm in it I'll need limited noise
I smash heads, bored out my mind with a violin and coke line
dreamin' of Spring and December and a million other times
like....like....potent prophecy those notes are ghost & gone to me
while I brood in hopeless harmony, hoping Hope would honor me
open the door so I can continuously quote the GOAT, the God in me
I suppose it's a inside joke to poke fun at those who commonly...
ordinarily....basically take offense to the shit you say...honestly
fuck that, and I quote "fuck that" who am I under the impression
just another exception another twist on another expression
til' I make another connection and you can tell me what is accepted
I'm sorry I'm beside myself...fin

Good stuff, the middle had strong spirit in it, esp. with the dense internal rhyming. Not too dense, but just right enough to make it easily readable.

I dig it.

"an hour", just to be a dick.

But, I dig your style. Some negativity in it, but you say it like you mean it, and it seems to come from the heart.

hmm...Good shit bro. I miss your stories. Like that dinner of death; the round table. Youve produced some really dope verses, all of which have been short. I wish you would focus more on a single verse, just fleshing that shit out and making it epic, yet keeping your signature free flowing, "key style esque" flow. This was a decent track with a few good bars, which was needed considering the length. But there were a few lines that simply weren't as good. Keep, doing you Old Timer