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A bit much repetition of certain words but overall decent work, cool shit. Hope he posts a pic (or sends one to a mod for confirmation) because I'd like to see him get all the posting privileges and be inducted into the forum as a worthy member of our community. Well written theMuzzl3.
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Yeah, I know I used a lot of the same words -- that was mostly out of laziness, but also on purpose. I notice verses of stuff nowadays that use the exact same word to rhyme several lines. My avatar is also a self-portrait from my younger years.
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theMuzzl3 AKA Malibu's Most Wanted Last edited by theMuzzl3; 08-27-2014 at 06:56 PM. |
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