Namix X-amin - Weekly Writing Challenge - Week 1

Lotto Smirk · 04-01-2013, 08:33 AM

Man I Thought i must be dreaming For weeks I've been scheming for this moment,to tell the family i'm leaving
Grabbed my ready packed bag, said goodbye to my dad n said "MUM i'm departing for Iraq this evening"
a tear in here eyes, she said this is were ya future lies ,but the image of the army is conceiving
Them words stuck in my mind,Was it truth,was it lies, but it was the army i chose to believe in
I landed in Iraq backpack on my back and already the image looked misconceiving
Friends wiening and fiening to keep there mates breathing, while screaming the army's lies are deceiving
I lasted 2 days of hell, then got pieced by a shell and the nurse couldn't stem the bleeding
This was it, the last few thoughts of my life, Shit i'll never have a kids & wife,this was a horrible feeling
My mother was right, Questions on my mind, Who's going to look after her while she's grieving
I had been there less than a week,No medals for me, it was just death i was achieving
I don't know what pissed me off more,that i won't see my mum anymore or that i had died in a war of no meaning

Bored so i thought i'd hit it up lines are a bit stretched though

04-01-2013, 08:33 AM	#1
Lotto Smirk Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,153 Battle Record: 37-49 Rep Power: 2665833	Man I Thought i must be dreaming For weeks I've been scheming for this moment,to tell the family i'm leaving Grabbed my ready packed bag, said goodbye to my dad n said "MUM i'm departing for Iraq this evening" a tear in here eyes, she said this is were ya future lies ,but the image of the army is conceiving Them words stuck in my mind,Was it truth,was it lies, but it was the army i chose to believe in I landed in Iraq backpack on my back and already the image looked misconceiving Friends wiening and fiening to keep there mates breathing, while screaming the army's lies are deceiving I lasted 2 days of hell, then got pieced by a shell and the nurse couldn't stem the bleeding This was it, the last few thoughts of my life, Shit i'll never have a kids & wife,this was a horrible feeling My mother was right, Questions on my mind, Who's going to look after her while she's grieving I had been there less than a week,No medals for me, it was just death i was achieving I don't know what pissed me off more,that i won't see my mum anymore or that i had died in a war of no meaning Bored so i thought i'd hit it up lines are a bit stretched though