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08-03-2014, 09:42 PM
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Sup scrip. Long time no read. I was into the first half and eventually decided that this was a train-of-thought type approach and lost some interest. This was more potent than what I usually see from you, so thats great. All you need now is to experiment with better structure form and candance. Focus on your angle and message too. Great job respectively, otherwise.
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