cow rhymes with how now and pow among other things

UnbornBuddha · 07-28-2014, 06:05 PM

This had a nice alliteration to it. It seemed to be more of a free piece, some random thoughts. Obviously it was coherent, it wasn't like a madmen just scribbling his ideas. It had a sense of structure to it.
I enjoyed the flow of this, especially this lines:
Leave no stone unturned burn the bridges and homes then witness the vicious cycle in the life of a drone.

This seemed more like an experimental piece. It didn't seem you were trying convey something in particular, but more on the extend on play on words, and certain sounds.

Anyways, thank you for sharing. Also what a funny thread title.

07-28-2014, 06:05 PM	#7
UnbornBuddha Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 1,008 Battle Record: 23-10 Champed - Art of Writing League - AOWL Season 5 Rep Power: 23856379	This had a nice alliteration to it. It seemed to be more of a free piece, some random thoughts. Obviously it was coherent, it wasn't like a madmen just scribbling his ideas. It had a sense of structure to it. I enjoyed the flow of this, especially this lines: Leave no stone unturned burn the bridges and homes then witness the vicious cycle in the life of a drone. This seemed more like an experimental piece. It didn't seem you were trying convey something in particular, but more on the extend on play on words, and certain sounds. Anyways, thank you for sharing. Also what a funny thread title.