07-27-2014, 11:42 PM
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Originally Posted by Doug Funny
Cmon jilati,
Who the fuck, u getting shot soon as u finish my willoughby
You relate to no one, at least you'll save time with how short the fuckin will'll be
If setup up better this would be dope. will'll isnt a word as well lol.
You got no potential. Ya style old, and its not getting newer
Ninja turtle ass nigga.. ya Fuckin ceiling, is the top of the sewer
weak
You prolly be employee of the month if u wanna war
You'll have time to help any customer around.. Imma fuckin leave u on the floor
I like the concept. but it didnt have any sting on it
Carjack you... hit u w/ yo shit, ...now u on the roof while I'm on the road
Screaming you don't wanna die; Ironic how yo ass died, on your own accord
doesnt rhyme. wording the connection is iffy with the ironic part. nice concept
My fists light niggas up. So if u step wrong
Imma use ya glass jaw, just to give me something to reflect on
eh weak
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Originally Posted by jilti
this a quick key. now don't get excited, i didn't say Quickie potna'
but the way Jils mopping the floor with him'll look like a commercial for cleaning products
No.
ur not on my level. i got a BA in science, ur just gonna get buried there son
cuz this aint a game, until they Dig Dug up after i put the pump to his chest area
connection isnt there, doesnt rhyme
ya girl scares us. she's loose & fat, huge w/flab u have to tuck inward
run squidward. cuz if Doug Fister, it'll get ate too (8-2) like that one pitcher
ate/8 is so played lol... weak flip
Fun w/glitter. walks with a sway cuz hips dont lie of course
so when this Bi Out,Pride Shows. that's a move UFC would co-sign for
cool wordplay and connection but kinda forced
if Doug Funny my punches are tongue n cheek, til his gums bloody
Clown this hungry bum like nothing while i take his McDonald's lunch money
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Doug funny has some good concepts. A few if worded and setup better would be dope. Jil didn't have anything that connected well. The UFC one was almost a hit. Jil also had a few complete misses and Dough didnt.
Vote: Doug Funny
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