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Doug Funny vs jilti [Jilti WINS]

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Cmon jilati,
Who the fuck, u getting shot soon as u finish my willoughby
You relate to no one, at least you'll save time with how short the fuckin will'll be
You got no potential. Ya style old, and its not getting newer
Ninja turtle ass nigga.. ya Fuckin ceiling, is the top of the sewer
You prolly be employee of the month if u wanna war
You'll have time to help any customer around.. Imma fuckin leave u on the floor
Carjack you... hit u w/ yo shit, ...now u on the roof while I'm on the road
Screaming you don't wanna die; Ironic how yo ass died, on your own accord
My fists light niggas up. So if u step wrong
Imma use ya glass jaw, just to give me something to reflect on

this a quick key. now don't get excited, i didn't say Quickie potna'
but the way Jils mopping the floor with him'll look like a commercial for cleaning products
ur not on my level. i got a BA in science, ur just gonna get buried there son
cuz this aint a game, until they Dig Dug up after i put the pump to his chest area
ya girl scares us. she's loose & fat, huge w/flab u have to tuck inward
run squidward. cuz if Doug Fister, it'll get ate too (8-2) like that one pitcher
Fun w/glitter. walks with a sway cuz hips dont lie of course
so when this Bi Out,Pride Shows. that's a move UFC would co-sign for
if Doug Funny my punches are tongue n cheek, til his gums bloody
Clown this hungry bum like nothing while i take his McDonald's lunch money

Not too big if a fan of this one. On one hand J had better concepts but the wording was poor. The dig dug line would have been hot if executed better. Doug just needs better lines period. Fresher ideas with more creativity. If J really did quick key that verse then I guess I understand but even still he gets the nod for a bit of a better verse.

V/jilti

To be honest I think was even battle both need a lil more work,
J had some good Concepts, wordplay need more work.
DF- This was eh, your bars lacking, next time add more creativity, flows, Punchlines & Personals.

Vote-J

Silver vote doesnt count. Not explained enough. back up vote with quotes, lotb something that proves you read both verses.

Sewer. Accord could of been dope but fumbled the wording.
Vs
Opener n everything else was worded pretty good.

Jil takes ths with wording in my opinion. Crispier n u could tell where he wantedto go with his concepts. Doug was all over the place with the wording imo.

Good battle guys.

V jil

Quote:

Originally Posted by Doug Funny (Post 362667)

Cmon jilati,
Who the fuck, u getting shot soon as u finish my willoughby
You relate to no one, at least you'll save time with how short the fuckin will'll be
If setup up better this would be dope. will'll isnt a word as well lol.
You got no potential. Ya style old, and its not getting newer
Ninja turtle ass nigga.. ya Fuckin ceiling, is the top of the sewer
weak
You prolly be employee of the month if u wanna war
You'll have time to help any customer around.. Imma fuckin leave u on the floor
I like the concept. but it didnt have any sting on it
Carjack you... hit u w/ yo shit, ...now u on the roof while I'm on the road
Screaming you don't wanna die; Ironic how yo ass died, on your own accord
doesnt rhyme. wording the connection is iffy with the ironic part. nice concept
My fists light niggas up. So if u step wrong
Imma use ya glass jaw, just to give me something to reflect on
eh weak

Quote:

Originally Posted by jilti (Post 364127)

this a quick key. now don't get excited, i didn't say Quickie potna'
but the way Jils mopping the floor with him'll look like a commercial for cleaning products
No.
ur not on my level. i got a BA in science, ur just gonna get buried there son
cuz this aint a game, until they Dig Dug up after i put the pump to his chest area
connection isnt there, doesnt rhyme
ya girl scares us. she's loose & fat, huge w/flab u have to tuck inward
run squidward. cuz if Doug Fister, it'll get ate too (8-2) like that one pitcher
ate/8 is so played lol... weak flip
Fun w/glitter. walks with a sway cuz hips dont lie of course
so when this Bi Out,Pride Shows. that's a move UFC would co-sign for
cool wordplay and connection but kinda forced
if Doug Funny my punches are tongue n cheek, til his gums bloody
Clown this hungry bum like nothing while i take his McDonald's lunch money
No.

Doug funny has some good concepts. A few if worded and setup better would be dope. Jil didn't have anything that connected well. The UFC one was almost a hit. Jil also had a few complete misses and Dough didnt.

Vote: Doug Funny

Dont know this battle wasnt yall best didnt feel like either of u put any effort in and like others said jil some of ur wordplay was forced and i felt like it took u a while to get any punches in i did enjoy ur last bar about tounge and cheek but i didnt like any of doug funnys so therefore my vote goes to jilti

My fists light niggas up. So if u step wrong
Imma use ya glass jaw, just to give me something to reflect on

vs

this a quick key. now don't get excited, i didn't say Quickie potna'
but the way Jils mopping the floor with him'll look like a commercial for cleaning products
ya girl scares us. she's loose & fat, huge w/flab u have to tuck inward
run squidward. cuz if Doug Fister, it'll get ate too (8-2) like that one pitcher

didnt really feel much of dougs verse. even the quoted bar was a played joint. gotta think of better concepts and flips. nothing stood as decent. jilti had a few fresh concepts that landed aight. have to be in the know on a few of em but the concepts were fresh to me.

v. jilti

Voting jolti here

He had 5 of the best 6 concepts in this battle

Both were wording thieir bars poorly

Doug had some very played thoughts ...
Also

Don't show us the wordplay ...

Well get the wordplay bro lol

V/ jilti

jilti wins 5-1

+7pts
jilti -3