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07-26-2014, 11:40 PM
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Your wording sucks and you beat your overall life/religion message into every single word you type. Plus you're condescending with the intellect. It's not so much writing as it is propaganda that adds the rhyme on for good effect. Not even a religion thing. If someone like black or Zenland wrote a relatively pro-religious piece I'd probably like it. Because they know nuance.
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