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Old 07-23-2014, 09:37 PM   #1
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This clearly "man vs. food", cuz you've been eaten 13 times!! Covered in drops of slob/
So I'll leave "Destroyer defeated in beef" like I'm "Furious Pete" at "Papa Bob's!!!"/


Expo; The Destroyer is a sandwhich with pork & beef patties at the resturant Papa Bob's that is so big there is a competition to finish it. It was showcased on the travel channel TV Show man vs food. Furious Pete is a competitive eater ranked #1 in the world.
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Old 07-25-2014, 12:20 AM   #2
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Destoyer- neat setup with a cool closer. Fundamentally sound with good execution. good shit.

Windu- if you ever go so big that you need to overly explain yourself in a battle won on punches, you already lost. I think you should Draft several punches and split them up into different punchline variants and choose the one that hits the hardest instead of cramming everything into one little ass bar. Just a thought. Good effort tho.

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