EL Pancake: the no show saga (please feed)

H4ZE · 07-23-2014, 03:58 AM

This was pretty dope man. Nice little brag piece and I think you killed this.
You had some really hard hitting punchlines in this verse that impacted hard,
Flow was on point the whole way through, your word choice and rhyme schemes
Spiced up the flow even more and it flowed very smoothly, good work.
You came hard with punches as well as rhymes and flow and that really made for
A good piece.
Keep up the good work and stay blessed man.
Peace.

07-23-2014, 03:58 AM	#3
H4ZE Member Join Date: Jan 2014 Location: Florida Posts: 77 Battle Record: 1-2 Rep Power: 0	This was pretty dope man. Nice little brag piece and I think you killed this. You had some really hard hitting punchlines in this verse that impacted hard, Flow was on point the whole way through, your word choice and rhyme schemes Spiced up the flow even more and it flowed very smoothly, good work. You came hard with punches as well as rhymes and flow and that really made for A good piece. Keep up the good work and stay blessed man. Peace.