Mac vs. Lotto Smirk vs. Jimbo {Lotto Smirk wins}

[Sn00p]

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@Mac @Lotto Smirk @Jimbo

[Lotto Smirk]

Check 12?

[Jimbo]

@Mac @Lotto Smirk*
It's 14*

[Jimbo]

Originally Posted by Mac

yo.. 3way . fuck

I saw this battle was 3 way - My first thought was "I love a good ol ruckus"*
Mac saw this battle got excited, now lottos hiding cus mac wants to fuck us
Really??? I already beat Lotto...And Mac is my first league assignment!?!?!?
Easy! Together there winning experience is shorter than an il nik a retirement!!
Ill leave both of yall hiding, youll be changing your names next!
One too MC "Lotto punches dont connect" - the other - MC "No clue on concepts"
Ill slap that sleezy cheesy smirk of lottos face, this match to me is a breeze.
With the heat im bringing im cooking emcees, so im serving mac an cheese
lotto went to ground first an macs next to get zero votes, so mac cowers
Both your reps going to smash the ground quicker then the fuckin twin towers
Listen faggots, this text lark aint something you learn, having natural skill is vital!
Closest you two will ever get to me - is having your names with mine in the title!
You two the worst ive seen and ive been on LA so take that into perspective!
You two arn't just bad your its definition in adjective - of poor quality; inferior or defective

(LA = Lyrical Assault)

[Mac]

yo.. 3way . fuck

[Lotto Smirk]

Jimbo the feminine type he uses maybelline n rimmel,fags so ugly its a disgrace
But he never puts mac on his face.. except for when he takes him back to his place
This one's to snoop.. i fucking hate you dude, God damn it
I dont care if they got a troubled marriage, I didn't want in the 3 sum they was plannin
I wanted a challenge, you know someone dope & tight
but these two mount a lyrical assault..n get laughed at like there from that site
Jimbo wanna fight? you had some speed cola explains why you so quick to blast off
But Im the Juggernaut, i aint worried He'll never packapunch even playing black ops
Jimbo is mad soft & Mac has no creativity, you think they winning you must be kidding me
Ill put mac in a box n send him out by parcel force.. Only way he'll have some good delivery
Jim's jobs aint a mystery, he has super skills as a painter n gets jobs by the bunches
I mean hes been 'decorating' his verses n convincing voters that it actually has punches
ya on the wrong site? Stop tryna be a matching suit with orc,your sexuality makes me think
But im a helpful guy, so ill waste a line to help you find the right one so i provided you a link

www.uniformdating.com There ya go jimbo

blah them last 4 lines hurt me

[Mac]

@Lotto Smirk @Jimbo i need an ext . i wont no-show. no worries

[Sn00p]

Mac noshows. This is just between Lotto Smirk and Jimbo now. But when voting please keep in mind that they directed some lines at Mac too.

[Sharp]

Originally Posted by Jimbo

I saw this battle was 3 way - My first thought was "I love a good ol ruckus"*
Mac saw this battle got excited, now lottos hiding cus mac wants to fuck us
3 person battle - 3 way lines are played. That said, this was kinda funny so i wouldn't call it a total miss, but the concept's done to death
Really??? I already beat Lotto...And Mac is my first league assignment!?!?!?
Easy! Together there winning experience is shorter than an il nik a retirement!!
alright, but definitely couldve been done better
Ill leave both of yall hiding, youll be changing your names next!
One too MC "Lotto punches dont connect" - the other - MC "No clue on concepts"
This was bad.
Ill slap that sleezy cheesy smirk of lottos face, this match to me is a breeze.
With the heat im bringing im cooking emcees, so im serving mac an cheese
why
lotto went to ground first an macs next to get zero votes, so mac cowers
Both your reps going to smash the ground quicker then the fuckin twin towers
9/11's another played connection, that bolding shit is whack and there wasn't much of a flip
Listen faggots, this text lark aint something you learn, having natural skill is vital!
Closest you two will ever get to me - is having your names with mine in the title!
played but alright
You two the worst ive seen and ive been on LA so take that into perspective!
You two arn't just bad your its definition in adjective - of poor quality; inferior or defective
you just stated that they're bad by defining it
(LA = Lyrical Assault)

dont bother with expos

Originally Posted by Lotto Smirk

Jimbo the feminine type he uses maybelline n rimmel,fags so ugly its a disgrace
But he never puts mac on his face.. except for when he takes him back to his place
Nice, coulda been worded better but hit
This one's to snoop.. i fucking hate you dude, God damn it
I dont care if they got a troubled marriage, I didn't want in the 3 sum they was plannin
like I said, 3-person battles/3way is played as fuck
I wanted a challenge, you know someone dope & tight
but these two mount a lyrical assault..n get laughed at like there from that site
alright
Jimbo wanna fight? you had some speed cola explains why you so quick to blast off
But Im the Juggernaut, i aint worried He'll never packapunch even playing black ops
eh
Jimbo is mad soft & Mac has no creativity, you think they winning you must be kidding me
Ill put mac in a box n send him out by parcel force.. Only way he'll have some good delivery
not bad
Jim's jobs aint a mystery, he has super skills as a painter n gets jobs by the bunches
I mean hes been 'decorating' his verses n convincing voters that it actually has punches
ehhhh
ya on the wrong site? Stop tryna be a matching suit with orc,your sexuality makes me think
But im a helpful guy, so ill waste a line to help you find the right one so i provided you a link
good ammo selection, didnt do anything with it
www.uniformdating.com There ya go jimbo
lol wat
blah them last 4 lines hurt me

Nika retirement and Mac and Cheese were your best attempts

v

Mac on face, lyrical assault and mac delivery were near quotable



Lotto's opener was the hardest hitting bar of the battle. Stick around though Jimbo, staying in the league for a few weeks will shape you up like no other.

V/ Lotto Smirk

[Lotto Smirk]

uppin

[Sn00p]

I saw this battle was 3 way - My first thought was "I love a good ol ruckus"*
Mac saw this battle got excited, now lottos hiding cus mac wants to fuck us
^yeah, this is kinda played, since it's a pretty obvious concept. try to stay away from those
Really??? I already beat Lotto...And Mac is my first league assignment!?!?!?
Easy! Together there winning experience is shorter than an il nik a retirement!!
^decent
Ill leave both of yall hiding, youll be changing your names next!
One too MC "Lotto punches dont connect" - the other - MC "No clue on concepts"
^uhm yeah, this wasn't delivered badly, but the concept was kinda basic.
Ill slap that sleezy cheesy smirk of lottos face, this match to me is a breeze.
With the heat im bringing im cooking emcees, so im serving mac an cheese
^i see the wordplay, but the bar lacked direction. try and focus your bar on your concept more
lotto went to ground first an macs next to get zero votes, so mac cowers
Both your reps going to smash the ground quicker then the fuckin twin towers
^don't bold. either a concept is there and we'll see it or it's too forced and you shouldn't use it in the 1st place. again, this felt a little old
Listen faggots, this text lark aint something you learn, having natural skill is vital!
Closest you two will ever get to me - is having your names with mine in the title!
^this wasn't bad. still a kinda obvious concept, but personally, i haven't seen it yet, so you get the benefit
You two the worst ive seen and ive been on LA so take that into perspective!
You two arn't just bad your its definition in adjective - of poor quality; inferior or defective
^nah. & don't explain things. it's the same as w/ bolding. either it's something obvious like LA being lyricalassault which we'll understand of course or it's way too forced and shouldn't be used either way.

vs.

Jimbo the feminine type he uses maybelline n rimmel,fags so ugly its a disgrace
But he never puts mac on his face.. except for when he takes him back to his place
^nice
This one's to snoop.. i fucking hate you dude, God damn it
I dont care if they got a troubled marriage, I didn't want in the 3 sum they was plannin
^yea, kinda played
I wanted a challenge, you know someone dope & tight
but these two mount a lyrical assault..n get laughed at like there from that site
^decent. kinda basic tho
Jimbo wanna fight? you had some speed cola explains why you so quick to blast off
But Im the Juggernaut, i aint worried He'll never packapunch even playing black ops
^decent
Jimbo is mad soft & Mac has no creativity, you think they winning you must be kidding me
Ill put mac in a box n send him out by parcel force.. Only way he'll have some good delivery
^decent again.
Jim's jobs aint a mystery, he has super skills as a painter n gets jobs by the bunches
I mean hes been 'decorating' his verses n convincing voters that it actually has punches
^decent. coulda been a hit harsher delivery
ya on the wrong site? Stop tryna be a matching suit with orc,your sexuality makes me think
But im a helpful guy, so ill waste a line to help you find the right one so i provided you a link
^nah, you know this wasn't good

jimbo, you need to think outside of the box more. you know what a punch is and you know how to word one, but your concept are a bit basic. lotto, it's kinda the same w/ you. at times, you just don't care enough. most of your bars could be really good if you spent a little more time on 'em. but you got this. you had the lotb w/ your opener and some other decent lines, which you had more of than jimb.
v/lotto

[Wicked]

Lotto: the changing your names bar was forced and kind of korny, the mac and cheese bar was actually a good idea but it missed. The twin towers was very basic and seems to be a played concept. The names in the title bar was cool, I liked that though it seems like an abvious concept and seems like it would be something that had been used a million times over the years, but I've never seen it so you're good with me. The closer I didn't like because I'm not a fan of somebody saying that their opponent is a word and then saying. better yet you're the definition.

Lotto: Nice opener, I had to google Mac .. lol .. It's kinda scary that you knew what that was. Just playin. But yea the opener was fire. The 3 way bar was kinda obvious. The Lyrical Assault line was okay. The Black Ops bar was okay, it could have been worded a little better though if ya ask me. The mac delivery bar was decent. The painter bar was okay, nothing too damaging though. The closer was filler and lazy if ya ask me.

Lotto had more punches and better concepts while Jimbo lacked concepts and missed punches in this particular battle.

V: Lotto

[RPK]

Really??? I already beat Lotto...And Mac is my first league assignment!?!?!?
Easy! Together there winning experience is shorter than an il nik a retirement!!

vs

Jimbo the feminine type he uses maybelline n rimmel,fags so ugly its a disgrace
But he never puts mac on his face.. except for when he takes him back to his place
I wanted a challenge, you know someone dope & tight
but these two mount a lyrical assault..n get laughed at like there from that site

Jimbo had a lot of straight misses. Lotto didn't have many misses, and stayed relatively consistent. I have to give it to lotto.
V/LS

[bleak]

Lotto takes this one pretty easily. He had a decent verse, the mac on his face was kinda nice. Jimbo didn't really have anything. He knows how to write a battle verse, he just doesn't have the idea of how to deliver punches. most of them were statementish. I hate 3 ways, so I'm glad this dropped to a 1v1. Decent shit on both sides but Lotto had plenty enough to take it.

[Dominate]

Really??? I already beat Lotto...And Mac is my first league assignment!?!?!?
Easy! Together there winning experience is shorter than an il nik a retirement!!

vs

Jimbo the feminine type he uses maybelline n rimmel,fags so ugly its a disgrace
But he never puts mac on his face.. except for when he takes him back to his place
lotb
I wanted a challenge, you know someone dope & tight
but these two mount a lyrical assault..n get laughed at like there from that site
Jim's jobs aint a mystery, he has super skills as a painter n gets jobs by the bunches
I mean hes been 'decorating' his verses n convincing voters that it actually has punches



both deliveries were a bit corny in places... Jimbo, be very sparing with exclamation marks ... Lotto you had the delivery wp which is played as fuck... good multies/flow though... and a couple concepts were cool... both of you keep working on fresh/creative concepts and wording...


v/ Lotto

[~RustyGunZ~]

mac on his face was the only decent bar tbh, both were lackluster. also the black ops bar showed a bit of creativity not great results but eh

v/lotto